All Comments on 'My First Time'

Writing porn, bad porn.

this story. Something that I would loved to have happen to me. Younger man who was a former student and wanted to fuck me every since. Inhibitions forgotten and hot raw sex with a hung black man would be SO hott.

nice of the lady to let anybody know she is now up for any cocks, in fucking a former student who is of course a gentleman and will tell anybody who wants to know and as it is quite ladylike to do it in front of all her girlfriends which of course are mute as stone as well. it's also good to know what kind of attitude a lady has when going out alone. she not only intends to fuck other guys no, she brings perhaps home a nice surprise in form of an std. maybe the husband gets lucky and wins the jackpot AIDS.

Had a ring of truth to it.

drippy over a black man. Too bad the scribbler ( writer he /it isn't ) To it don't write another...what ever this was.. an aborthion or something. The way I see it ...you came too soon while writing this abortion. Don't do another..DO YOU HEAR...WIMP NYMINUS

Bring it on

For a start, it is massaging, not messaging. Either that or it must be some mobile/cell phone - where can I get one! I have read a lot of worse stories on this site, so for a first effort, it was not bad. Not good either though. Keep on writing, be interesting to see how your skills develop

A good and very erotic story was well told. That of course brought out the yahoos who saw fit to trash another person's efforts. If anybody should be ashamed here it is the nitwits who dove in to give it a zero. That's except for the special yahoo who always gives it two zeroes.

Sigh, it's literotica dudes.

A good storyline and a believable story. Written very well and it's erotic. It's too bad a few assholes have to rain on your parade. Thanks for the post......Rich

brilliant first story. do hope there another soon great writing.

brilliant first story. do hope there another soon great writing.

And hate white men so much? That of course could be asked of all those readers who get off on reading such stories. I assume they and you the writer jerked off after readign this story. Well I am also gueesing that the people thta didn't LIKE this story DID NOT jerk off.

Why does the commentor below believe interracial sex (blackman and white woman) means the white man is hated. No logic there.

Personally, I'd divorce her, what would you do, I also think your black, so I can see how you might like this.

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The sentences are short. Brief little bursts of words. Not just the thoughts either. The story as well. Reads like Jack Webb. Remember Jack Webb? Just the facts ma'am. Commas work too. Try them and see. Makes a story flow.

Ok story, it was short and fast on the action. I received my first of many long hard fucking ten years ago with a black electrician doing some work for us, I'm sure he's electrified many married white women like myself.