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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 4 years ago
Another first for Mel

O.K., she doesn't like to be called Mel. But she doesn't know I'm doing it, does she? She's just a character in a story. Chapter 4, a first with Leo. Chapter 5, a first with George - and a second - and a second with Leo too! And a spit roast. I'm not sure that's a first for her. But it was a first with Leo and George! Lots of firsts and seconds! And one more first - a first-rate story! Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Firsts

Very nice addition. A suggestion for another first. Learning to eat pussy. Something every hot young despot needs to know.

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