by Total_ROM
Great story flooded with memories so delightfully yet painfully aligned with this story. I so wanted to flip back to the author’s page and select the next installment.
Great story minor annoyance to not know the whatever. Def have me hooked regretfully since it has been couple years since posting ☹️
You write a great story. Most people see a sort of contract between the writer & the reader, in which one tells a complete tale, or writes successive segments to arrive at some ending or closure. You failed in that measure horribly. With your red-head neighbor series and again in this story. Don't bother to write anything else if your intention is to start another great tale & then drop the reader flat. It's not nice to waste people's time!! 😑