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Did you write this as you were standing on the beach at Fantasy Island waiting for the plane to fly over? This borders on the insane! Imagine (haha) that what you wrote was actually 'true' ~ I know, it's a Lit fantasy ~ after having his balls wrapped so tightly, that many times, and then kicked close to 50 times so hard he was rolling around on the floor in pain, the daily phone call would have come from the floor nurse explaining how they held out little hope of saving his balls. Seriously??!!!! Hahaha!!!!

I hope you found some enjoyment in what I wrote, but I also recognize that I am new to this and may not be very skilled yet. If you have any suggestions for how I can improve, I would be grateful to receive them. Thank you.