by Thomas_Lodge
I was so happy to check out the site this morning and see a story from you Thomas. We pretty much have the same interests so I always get excited when I see a new series. So much possibilities with this setting: forced nudity, straight guys naked, physical exams, group showers and strip searches, humiliation and exposure. Looking forward to the rest of the series.
OMG! I would have never guessed anything like was coming up in the Tyler Braxton sequel. Once again, you've floored me with your imagination. I am glad though that you chose to reunite Tyler and Ryan. They had been too close all their lives to let them stay estranged. I imagine he'll certainly get an education of a different kind this time. That locker room gangbang will look like vanilla sex compared to what will probably happen here in prison. Can't wait to hear what was said between him and Autin. Great start to this sequel. Thanks, MLF
Very surprising turn of events! And i'm all ready for this new ride, so happy to get back into Tyler's (dirty) mind.
Fuck your imagination.... After all that time we wait is it all you give us... Ughkkk bullshit
made me horny love to have big thick cock in my ass and mouth fill me with cum
really enjoy being carried over strong guys shoulder and submitting to his big cock
Do you even have a serious education in writing in correct English grammar??!! By the fifth grade my writing revealed a vastly better education and basic knowledge of correct grammar than you show here in this abused story which could have been GREAT and hugely erotic, and all your lack of imagination and writing skill could accomplish was wrecking a terrific opportunity. You deserve a year in county jail for such a gross violation of not only English grammar, but also failing to write with any real feeling for the huge dominance-and-submission erotic/sexual potential good writing would/could breathe into a narrative involving a jail related strip and body cavity search. There's NO excuse for a waste of space and the lost chance of creating great erotic narrative like this pathetic example of a story exemplifies, in my view. I wish you greater success in your future writing endeavors should you try again after a High School level course in Creative Writing combined with spankings for each and every grammatical mistake you make in future.
[Denver, Colorado]
I’m reading one of the Anonymous reviews below. Three months earlier. First, English is not the writer Thomas’s first language. If you don’t have anything nice to say, shut the fuck up and write your own story, since we know you’re perfect!