All Comments on 'My Friend the Sex Worker Pt. 01'

Nice premise and writing.

E. in New York City ("nycreader" here).

I really like the story and am interested to see where you go with it. If you don't mind some constructive criticism ( I hope you take it that way), I would use the word 'yeah' instead of 'ya'. To me it flows a little better. To me, the use of 'ya' makes her sound Swedish or Norwegian. Now if she really is Nordic, then disregard the comment. Good story.

I hope you continue the story. I really liked it

Way too much build-up and conversation. It read very clinical and not that erotiic.

Please continue. I just know the next part will be super hot.

Not my fetish, but very well done