by Fitnerd7
Didn’t care for the stupid history lesson on nonsense nor did I care for this stupid story. I wouldn’t continue unless you are writing for an audience of two
In concept, this is great. In practice, not so much. None of the characters have real personality (saying "haha" every 3 seconds doesn't count), and every sentence manages to have way too much going on at once while still being completely flat. Upside of the story is the big numbers involved. Definitely hot, but not well written
This story has potential to be good, great even, but right now the characters need a bit more development and I hope there will be in the next part. NO grammatical mistakes, that I could see, but maybe make up your mind, is this story focus on the characters or the sex.
Zayne
Very good start! Keep going, don't be afraid to give more details and lengthier dialogue
Normal humans can reach 7 ft in height. Its not common but its not rare either. Its strange that peple would distinguish them from other people beyond saying that they are tall.