All Comments on 'My Giantess Futa Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Here are my thoughts.

More please definitely need more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great!

This is a great story, so far!! Continue please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Didn’t care for the stupid history lesson on nonsense nor did I care for this stupid story. I wouldn’t continue unless you are writing for an audience of two

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Amazing job!

I really loved how cute it got at the end. :3

loftylydialoftylydiaalmost 5 years ago

Cute story so far! I can't wait to find out how big Fiona is.~

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

In concept, this is great. In practice, not so much. None of the characters have real personality (saying "haha" every 3 seconds doesn't count), and every sentence manages to have way too much going on at once while still being completely flat. Upside of the story is the big numbers involved. Definitely hot, but not well written

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I agree with anonymous

This story has potential to be good, great even, but right now the characters need a bit more development and I hope there will be in the next part. NO grammatical mistakes, that I could see, but maybe make up your mind, is this story focus on the characters or the sex.

Zayne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Very good start! Keep going, don't be afraid to give more details and lengthier dialogue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Regarding megas

Normal humans can reach 7 ft in height. Its not common but its not rare either. Its strange that peple would distinguish them from other people beyond saying that they are tall.

Anonymous
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