All Comments on 'My Girl'

Hope he enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed reading it ! I look forward to C2.

You have described what I have witnessed happening to couples where the woman has submitted and accepted their role as sexual subs to a owner or master. It seldom works in a business environment but given the right people with the right controls it can and should be a highly successful life for them both. Unless the finally marry her pregnancies will be difficult to explain in the office. Such woman dont need to be farmed out as sluts to others or turned into whores. They can be highly successful and happy pleasing one man in many ways over their life. I am married to mine and after 14 years she is still trying to please me in every way she can and apologizes and is ashamed when anything in our lives doesnt work out perfectly. RB

Wow! Nice story! :) I hope,you have some more for us!

I definetly would like to see a few more chapters! Well Done!

but too short for my taste. A couple of typos didn't help. I'm glad there is a chapter two.

Really enjoyed it. Well written and convincing characters to me.

Pete D