All Comments on 'My Girl Best Friend's Dick'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A little short but to the point. I like it well enough that I hope you continue this story and she fucks guys.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

A good start! More please.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Hope you write more.

QwixelQwixel12 months ago

All other issues aside. You would benefit from an editor.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Great start, I am interested to see were future chapters with those two will head on (I could easily imagine Marissa trying out the dick growing chemicals for some mind breaking mutual penetration fuck between them).

HeartbloodblackHeartbloodblack6 months ago

This was a pretty fun read, although if I'm honest, the "I'm scared you'll hate me for having a dick" trope kicks me out of immersion. It feels mellow dramatic in an unsatisfying way to me. I think this story needs another scene to clarify the emotions and set up the relationship a little better.

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