All Comments on 'My Girlfriend the Engineer Ch. 01'

As an engineer and programmer myself I really appreciated the fine edged balancing of detail and eroticism in this story.

A perfect cliff hanger ending causes me to really look forward to the next chapter.

And the lack of, at least to me, any grammatical / writing errors made this a perfect read.

I might suggest that you expand a bit on changing the point of so that all three of them (disinterested observer and the two ladies) are more balanced in the next chapter(s).

Please keep up the great work.

It would have been better if Hayley knew it was coming, but aside from that it was alright

Your story was very hot. I liked the bits about the program just proceeding -- that turned me, on too. Please write more.

Thank you Libby!

Now I need to have tentacles in my life!! (0vo)

In moon's opinion, tentacle hentai is more creepy when organic. The idea of this as mech was interesting in it's clinical approach to pleasure. And as a shared experience between user and...used. Well, it was hot. Also, the Doc Ock imagery was spot on.

It's a good thing no one sat opposite me in the train, otherwise my wide and mischievous grin would have worried them.

And that is why I love engineering and engineers.