My Girlfriend's Rival Ch. 02

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Monica gradually pulled herself away from me and propped herself back up onto her knees. She kneeled on the bed with her back straight up, perfect posture, breasts pushing out towards my boyfriend. She coyly raised one arm over her chest in a display of mock modesty. Her eyes went wide as the three of us exchanged wordless stares. Then, giving my boyfriend a sexy pout, she said, "I didn't know you were expecting company…"

I had no idea how to react; I was completely stunned. I was astonished that Monica seemed completely un-phased.

"So…" she smiled curiously, fixing her gaze at me, "Are you going to kick your boyfriend out?" She advanced her body up closer to me, straddling her knees around my legs and placing her hands on my shoulders, gently pushing me down. "Or will you let him stay and watch you make me come?"

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AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Can anybody please make their own continuation of this series?

I'm sure yours will be great.

TheDemonWhispererTheDemonWhispererabout 2 months ago

Change of Pov killed it for me. Sad cause pt 1 was good.

GlennJenkoGlennJenkoabout 2 months ago

It's a shame the author seemingly will never continue this, because both parts were excellent.

I have to be honest, I wasn't expecting the first part to be on a level with the first, but it was even better. Monica's seduction was so much hotter with the girlfriend and unlike with the first part I sensed the beginnings of a genuine connection between the two women, not just Monica's seduction.

I don't like being the kind to give whole other endings on stories, but I do wonder if it was heading towards the girlfriend and Monica getting together given that more genuine connection I mentioned. Also given Monica's question was if he wanted to watch, not join in.

If I had any complaints, it's that I'd have liked there to be a little more sex between the girls before the boyfriend turned up. And a nitpick, I think Monica should've genuinely forgotten that purse. Could've fit better with her blushing while saying she was "distracted" when she left before. Not much else would've had to change either.

But now I'm rambling. Again, great stories that I thoroughly enjoyed.

Toro1886Toro18864 months ago

Holy Fuck....this just sizzled !!

Gusman300Gusman3004 months ago

I would love to see them start having a threesome and then Monica totally dominating the boyfriend right in front of Jennifer and Jennifer can't stop the seduction of her boyfriend as Monica steals him away from her.

createddestroyercreateddestroyer4 months ago

Needs a part 3 asap!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

We need chapter 3!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Hypocrisy. A jealous girlfriend with OC tendencies lusts for her rival while gaslighting her boyfriend for doing the same. Monica is like a Bo Derek manipulating fans into her web of amusing affairs. Sexual entertainment?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Conflict. The amount of thought, lust, deception, manipulation, omission, teasing, and denial to create the desired conditions for this seduction was no little effort and a ton of desire. It makes 'the conquest' seem inevitable.

Well the exclusive relationship is open, now.

maxsteelemaxsteele6 months ago

I just will like to say that if the author is still alive, I'll love to read another chapter of this so the three of them can figure out their feelings so we'll know if a threesome happens or if heartbreaking occurs.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Chapter 3????

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

So the stupid fvcking smug ass terrible girlfriend doesnt want her boyfriend to cheat but has no problem doing it herself. I hope the dumb b1tch finds out her BOYFRIEND had the skank first

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It's always weird to me when authors have this amazing lesbian story, and conclude it with the boyfriend showing up before the two women even finish the first time together. So much potential, and then just crushing it for...what, exactly?

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