All Comments on 'My Graduate School Romance Ch. 03'

Can't tell the players without a scorecard!

5

Fast paced and complex. I've known middle aged men who could pull young women. I always wondered how they did it. Fun read. 5.

Wow, that was a hot chapter and Lori was a surprise! Like Boyd, I am losing track of who’s who and I think for chapter 4, you should take a few paragraphs to recap who’s who and what’s happened so far. I’m loving the story but seriously losing track, especially with all the other chapters from different perspectives

@ Anonymous - That's a great suggestion. I wasn't sure what Boyd was getting at. Now I do. Thank you.

Looking forward to Pt. 4. How soon can we expect to see it? Thanks again for sharing your great writing.

G

I had to rework part 4 twice. My initial version had a major continuity issue that had to be fixed. That caused a cascade effect that is forcing a part 5. I hope to have both parts up in November.