All Comments on 'My Harem'

No story here, nothing to cause anyone to pay attention for any reason. Nothing to even critique. No one will have any interest if this is your best effort to write.

rubbish

I liked this. Don't pay attention to the others say no story.

It's a poem not a novel and nobody should expect something to be something else

Ignore the other comments. This is a poem not a novel. So what if the plot doesn't progress