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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Not a bad plot, just poorly written. In the first paragraph Rini is in her early 30s, in the next. paragraph she is in her 20's. Poor grammar throughout the story. Perhaps in the future you may wish to consider help with editing.

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