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Click hereAnd little did the hyper-horny twosome preparing to fuck in my viewfinder know -- So were the surprises.
End Part I
No criticisms here, just stiffness. Something of this nature happened to me years ago - and then we married. 5 STARS JOHN.
A guy 'with too many teeth in his mouth'.
Could have been worse I suppose: he could have had them in his pocket!
As someone who was a long-time commenter before writing anything, I don't see anything wrong with non-writers criticizing. All of us go to movies, then talk about, or even post about, how great they were or how much they sucked. How many of us have made a movie?
How many professional critics have worked in the medium they criticize?