All Comments on 'My Japanese Mom, My Boyfriend's BWC'

great! please continue

I definitely need a part 2

Would like to see a part two. 5 stars

Love Raceplay keep it up

GREATTTTTTTTTTTTT

Hot as fuck. My dick is iron after reading this.

AWESOME...you def have a flair for sexy writing...keep up the good work...and PLEASE continue this story!!

WOW! Great story! Well written. I do hope you continue to contribute!

Terrific, but needs a second or even a third chapter with a pregnant mom and daughter... 5/5

If this is truly your first story, you're off to a great start. 5/5.

TimTam

It was a bit different, for sure. Nicely written and titillating. Unlike many 'first timers' on this site your text was not littered with grammatical errors. Well done. It would be nice if you had a biography. Maybe you are Japanese. I'm curious.

Great would like more hopefully mom and daughter gets pregnant by him

You are a good story teller. Huge potential to expand the sexual content. Good erotic descriptions. Perhaps get all three together and turn Mom into your cum toy?

Loved it, I hope more are Cumming

Surprised this wasn't about the Bureau of Workers' Compensation

Wow, thanks so much everyone! I'm so surprised at how well it has been received!

Let me think a little about a part 2.

Please feel free to leave me any stylistic comments / critiques too. I'm sure my writing could be better.

Outstanding! This was a unique story that stands out as much as Dan's cock, Keep it up!

for a virgin you got a good start. like to see what happens next.

Great first story….

Looking forward to the rest.

The erotica is so well done...excellent rise and fall of tension, heat. However, that alone does not do it. You are a writer!! Mechanics, descriptions, overall style and tone are great. Keep on keepin' on

I have had the pleasure of a hot Japanese pussy - - How sweet it is !!!!

Very good. Her internal conflict of Jealousy vs desire to watch was a fun to read how it played out. Her sneaking in for a quicky when her mom showered was my favorite part. Very original idea

what the actual fuck gonna possess : Dan think Yumi's mother gonna wanna become sexual with him ??!!!!!!!!!!

what the actual fuck gonna possess : Yumi think her mother gonna wanna become sexual with Dan ???!!!!!!!!!!

- - sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo - - even though this portion wasn't listed like ever . . .

your saying : Yumi's mother has already officially hit on Dan in front of Yumi couple times possibly more

1st time is a winner. Great start. Looking forward to more.

I liked it very much!

Grate story definitely needs a part 2 or more

Love your writing style

I liked the twists in classic mother of girlfriend theme. It was confusing at first, but the tease got better. I liked that it didn't have "character development" fluff. I mean, this is porn, so all characters should be fully developed, ready, willing, and able. More sequels, please.

Fantastic first effort. Would love a follow-up where he ends up getting Mei (or even better, both Mei & Yumi) pregnant and they have to deal with the fallout from that.

If I were to offer some small criticisms, it's that your descriptions of the actual sex were a bit too simple/brushed over, but your depiction of everything outside of that was excellent.

Great storyline, so original and sooo erotic. Promises more things to come. We need a part 2! :)

Agree with others. Great first start. Loved the ending pun.

previous message reasonably harsh though gotten truth around . . . i've am gonna adding : still excellent

still fantastic still awesome ...........................

FURTHER INSTALLMENT FURTHER INSTALLMENTS - Yumi tells Dan that she doesn't mind him actually fucking

her mother . as long she does become told . as long she watches she listens . as long her father never learns

this act these acts . Dan proceeds telling Yumi he'll absolutely agree terms . as long he gets literally fuck

both women . Mei tells Dan that she only wants him along gonna divorce husband . Mei also proceeds telling

Dan that she's ok share him along with her daughter as long Mei's husband along also their daughter

doesn't know doesn't learn . Dan tells Mei that he's gonna continue date her daughter along he's

gonna also continue fuck her daughter . Dan proceeds telling Mei that he's gonna absolutely continue fucking

her on daily basis along any way that he can figure out . Dan also tells Mei he isn't gonna ever stop their

sex sessions romp sessions

( does Mei's husband ever learn about these happenings this act these acts . if so what's outcome )

( does Dan ever tell Yumi about all the sex romps sex sessions he has her mother . or does he keep

certain things lots things hidden her . if it stays hidden stays secret from Yumi how long days weeks

months years ) ( does Yumi ever join her mother along also Yumi's boyfriend while the

sex romps sex sessions going down . if so what kinda area happens areas happens : sauna , dressing room

inside store , jacuzzi while the three of them just relaxing , bathroom stall inside restaurant , on the

pavement of the swimming pool that they got , ECT ) ( does Yumi ever catch the two of them her mother

along also Yumi's boyfriend sex romps sex sessions when she wasn't ever told it when she wasn't ever

told them . if so what kinda area happens areas happens same situations same scenarios ) ( what's gonna

happen after Mei does become pregnant from Dan whether Mei's husband learns the truth or not -

whether Yumi learns truth or not . along what's gonna happen after Dan does learn he got Mei pregnant - if he

ever does learn it . along who does learn it second along who does learn it third along who

does learn it last . along how do each of them learn it if they ever do )

fantastic, can't wait for more!

Great Love Story Five Stars lets have anouther Story

Great story! In college I dated a Korean girl and her mother was even hotter-- the mother knew I was into her. She walked in on us a few times-- once when we were in the shower as I had my gf pinned against the wall pumping away and the other time when I had her bent over-- I purposely pulled out so she could see my fat cock-- she always acted surprised but her eyes always went straight to my cock. I love Asian pussy-- wet and fresh. My gf got a little mad when after the third time I suggested that it can't be a mistake that her mom keeps walking in "by accident". Now that I am older and for the last 6+ years have only dated Asian women-- I have found Asian women over 45-50 love to fuck, fuck and fuck more-- lol!!! Keep writing and see my stories.

Pt 2 posted, just waiting on Literotica to review. Should be live in a day or two.

I expect this series to be across 3 parts, or 4 at most.

I've also posted another story, pending approval, which I hope you like.

Regardless, I hope you all enjoy reading this next chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it.

U_Desire

The best I have read in a while. Keep up the great work.

It was as if I was there.

Great start, asian sluts worshipping white cock is a good theme. Making them more submissive along the way would also be nice.

Super hot chapter. Yumi really a freak hahaha. Great start. Fast but fantastic pacing. You're stories flow and don't get bogged down.

Great Love Story Five Stars

Great Love Story Five Stars Looks like mom and Daughter are both wild fucks RW

Wow, so hot. What a lucky boy Dan is. Asian woman are so hot. Act shy with a devil inside.

Loved the story. Happy to see there are more stories. Looking forward to following a new favorite

loved it had a similar experience when i was in high school fucking the mom and daughter they both knew though, loved it took me back down memory lane thank you

Really hot.

5 stars. Very erotic

Very interesting storyline you are starting with these characters. Hope it gets to a threesome.