All Comments on 'My Latest Rape Dream'

A good first effort with some promise so keep writing!

I really enjoyed your first story submission and I look forward to reading more from you.

I enjoyed this very much. However I have my own question. The title of the story is,” My Latest Rape Dream," This leads me to question if this actually happened to the main character?

Grocery shopping after a night club,cmon,but still a good read. Thanx

So in the beginning... she was at a club facing the wall? She'd have to be if he put his hands on the wall on either side and she whirled around to face him...

That' one of the best times to go grocery shopping. There's usually a lot of single women doing the same thing. Anyway you might just be picking up something or someone for breakfast.

It is a hot story and made me really wet. I don't care if some parts at the beginning were unlikely to happen, I enjoyed it. Thank you for your submission:)