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To be continued....
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoLoving this so far and looking forward to the next chapter and how he becomes so much more feminine does she start help doing the chores in the house or maybe starts dressing more feminine ...does she become a sissy daughter for her Mom also ?
Anonymous6 months agoProof read!!!!! I got lost in the bad grammar and lost interest. This is poor writing. I am turned off!
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWish I had a big cocked black step daddy to catch me dressed up and fill my faggot pussy with his seed.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoThis story made me really hard all the time even if its my second rime to read this its still makes me want to cum without even touching my self... Anyway Im still waiting for the continuation of the story.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYour story consists mainly of sentences beginning with Charles (or Chris) does X. Consequently, it feels more like a screenplay, than a story. You need to step away from the X's and O's of the scene and write about what they are doing, as opposed to stating what is happening. Build in some transition points and try not to start paragraphs the same way (e.g. Charls does...).The dialog, unlike most stories, is pretty solid and believable. Moreover, there is some real heat here. It's a decent first attempt.
