All Comments on 'My Life as My Father's Slave Ch. 04'

I'm so conflicted right now. Chapter #4 has got my head spinning. On one hand it looks like Mason is just doing these things so that he can fool the inspector. On the other hand, it looks like he's actually enjoying being master. This is all getting very intense now and I'm still hoping lines aren't crossed that can't be explained later. But please don't end this story with Ethan being freed and forgiving everyone for their inhumane treatment of him like Brandon did in "Betrayed and Enslaved". Some of these monsters are unforgivable and deserve to be punished for their actions. Looking forward to chapter #5. MLF

This is amazing, each part gets better. Can’t wait to see what happens next

Looks like Dad is enjoying dehumanizing Ethan. I think he needs to go through a shock like seeing Ethan trying to kill himself, to come to his senses again.

I love how Mason is taking control as master, and I kind of hope Ethan willingly submits to him. I’ve read betrayed and enslaved so I know how this story may end, but I think this master/slave dynamic should stay somehow - Mason is a man with needs, and Ethan is filling them. Maybe Ethan realizes that it’s not so bad and he enjoys serving his master. I don’t want Mason to have to apologize, being Ethans master suites him. It would be a good twist, different than your other stories (which I love) but they have both ended with apology and resolution. I don’t want Mason to apologize, I want him to continue to assume the role of Master unapologetically (believing his superiority to Ethan, while still loving him) and for Ethan to assume the role of slave (collar or not) because I think this is filling a hole for him as well. I literally cannot wait to read the rest however the story ends you are a great storyteller and this story scratches an itch I didn’t know I had :)

This was too hot…. Really lovedthis