All Comments on 'My Lingerie-Loving Sister Moves In'

I love this story, so hot and wonderful.

Yay!

I love how much attention you spend on developing your characters. It makes everything feel more tangible. Thank you for reposting your stories. They are a treat each and every time I read one.

Excellent

Very well done! This one needs a sequel or to be a series; you have done so well developing their realtionship, I would like to know more about their future. Whether it continues or not, thank you for this one.

Oooh, my dude, you have such a talent for slow and teasing build up that so many stories on here are missing! That was great, I loved that. Definitely a top five in this category! I hope to meet someone into lingerie like these two are, it sounds so enticing!

I remember reading this before and gave it 5 Stars back then. My wish is that she keep her heels on while taking cock.

Maybe a follow up with her wearing a sheer bra and satin garterbelt with sheer stockings and frilly ankle sox with heels that she keeps on while fucking.

She could talk dirty about how much she loves fucking. That she has been dreaming about fucking her dirty little bro. Letting him cum in her mouth and on her pretty face.

All while dressed up in sexy lingerie and heels.

I have thousands of pics of my stepdaughter dressed up in sexy lingerie as described above. In all white, all black, lite blue sheer bra and panties with white knee high socks on. Plus a white set of a sheer bra and panties with white knee high socks on an also a change up to white frilly ankle sox and heels on.

Plus a royal blue garterbelt and sheer nude stockings with frilly white ankle sox with black heels on

Lastly I have two different cheerleader outfits for her, where she looks like a slutty little fuck doll cheerleader.

We haven't fucked yet but I'm hopeful.

One of my favorite stories on this site.

This story sounds realistic which makes for good fiction. For example, "I moved my hand towards Nora's crotch. I slid it through her light brown crotch hair to reach her pussy. I parted her wet pussy lips with my middle finger and slid it down to her clit. Nora moaned." I gave this one a four, then I decided it should be a five (the natural hairy pussy on Nora) and changed it. I look forward to more.

Excellent. I'm jealous. More please.

Wow! The way you built up the romance with teasing, flirting, and compliments was so good! Totally schooled us on good writing.

But you still didn't add an epilogue to it! That's the one thing this story really needed, and what everyone was always asking for.

I think you need it to keep the story going. What about their skiing trip? What about engagement? Secretly living together as a couple under the families noses? Her getting pregnant? There was no tan colored nylons.. keep this story going

This was absolutely amazing. I loved these characters so much. The character delvelopment was too notch.

I have to say, your b/s love stories like this one and the others you have are some of the best on the site. When the story is just two people in love you always knock it out of the park in my opinion anyway. You always create some.of the best dialogue as well.

I love this. Seriously. Great plot. You write so well.

Very hot story line. I love the REVIEW of THE NIGHT. The two different perspectives and reactions over what happened that night are so typical of couples who haven't learned good communication skills. That often results in AVOIDANCE/ EXPLOSIVE OUTBURST which further aggravates the problems.

Looking forward to another chapter.

One of your very best stories and my top one or two I have missed it. Every time I read it I find it better than I remembered Thank you for reposting it.

Exceptionally well written, with a slow burn that was actually a slow build. Not many medium length tales here keep slowly kicking up the heat. You did.

The GOAT is back!!!

Really well done, a long buildup and not a rushed writer that got horny and decided to just throw it all out there. 5/5

I know I've read this story before...

I read both the old and the new I like the new better great story and very good telling of it. Will be reading all your works. Thanks.

Very enjoyable story.

This story was just terrific, loved the pace you set.

I wouldn't mind another chapter as they navigate the relationship

Thanks for re-posting this story, it was great to read how the pair overcome the event that split them apart so many years ago, which lead them to appreciate and become much closer before taking there relationship to new heights

Good lord!! Very well done, amazing read.

Very good mate, enjoyed the read

Yum! That is all. 5+fave.

Awesomeness

I thought that this was/is one of the best stories I have ever read. It was perfect in every sense. If you end up posting more dries I can guarantee you I will be reading them.

Great work.

I hate to sound crass but I don't know any other way to share how fucking hot this was than to say this was really fucking hot.

Very well written too, but the curse of telling a fucking hot story is that it's easy to take for granted how well written a story is when it is, in fact, well written.

(12/20/2023) Well, this is back on my favorites list. I didn’t have a problem with the setup of the story and I don’t remember any controversy regarding it when I first read it a few years ago. This was nice, romantic, and quite believable, IMO. Glad to have you back.

As with all of your others stories - VERY HOT!! Will there be a chapter two?

This is the best! Nothing has been close! Very much so!

Awesome experience. Good read.

I had read the old version. This version was even more satisfying. Very nice.

This was the first story I read that made me a big fan of yours. Great to see it back.

I love the hint of pregnancy and where their relationship will go. I hope you'll consider writing a follow-up to this, where Nora is pregnant and they have to navigate telling their parents. It'd be very romantic, in a sense.

Loved the set up and the early reveal whic my heightened the anticipation. Also the description of Nora and how she dressed of otherwise. Very hot.

I rarely give a 5, but this story earned it. Perfect build up to the good stuff, and just the right amount of detail.

Thanks for posting!

This is your best story yet! I love your works. Your characters are so realistic, and the dialog seems real, not staged.

Wonderful story

Thank you for sharing your stories

5*****

I've been reading incest since 1974 (Penthouse Forum) and this is one one the best ever.. It's difficult for good look, successful, honest people to find mates. Beautiful solution.

Definitely!

Glad to see this one back.

A beautifully told story. 5/5*

Amazing, I always enjoy your work. Been a fan for a long time.

First off, you are an excellent writer. I like the way this story played out with a long buildup and definition of the characters. There really are very few well written stories on here and yours is absolutely one of the best.

I enjoyed it very much.

The story was amazing, great build up and the romance was well worth the read. Would love a follow up to see how their life together ends up. Also as a side note as a former Houstonian, it was a thrill to hear about places I have not visited in many years. Brought back a lot of great memories. look forward to reading more of your works.

I loved the slow build up - very believable and authentic. Well done

Like others here, I enjoyed the taunting, long buildup (who wants wham bam these days?) and it's always a pleasure to read a tale that is so well written. Spelling, grammar to a high level. This is the first I have read in your portfolio, so now I must check out your full list. Bravo!

A great story again to join your my other stories. Could we see a chapter 2?

So hot and well written. The suspense and build up are great. Can't wait to see if you write more about Greg and Nora.

Meh, the sister is too much of a slut for my taste.

I loved it from beginning to end. Great read - looking forward to reading more of your stories.

I have to say I like your writing style, though you need to work on going from 1st Person to 3rd person, it gets confusing at times and makes the story telling "Sterile" when you are not being detail oriented. Going back and forth is the First Deadly Sin in novel writing. If you've never taken a college level Writing Class, I'd suggest you do, even at Community College level IF you find an experienced Prof and not some clown who's just citing from a Text book and only write Tech Manuals.

You do a very good job of building your characters, when you are writing essentially a romance novel, even if it's Autoerotic in whatever genre, try being more "romantic" and "feeling", not so "grey scale". You are not black and white, but be more colorful. Women writer don't have a corner on this.

Also, Stop "running on your paragraphs"!! ANY change in thought MEANS A NEW PARAGRAPH!! So many "writers" on this cite write like that never paid attention in their English classes after 3rd grade. Sign up for a paid only Grammar/Spell checker, the one built into later versions of MS Word is impressive and makes a good alternative to a living PROFESSIONAL Editor.

Lastly, I personally think this particular story deserves another chapter, you left too much hanging. How do they broach their romantic relationship to their aged and likely conservative parents, you hint (built that in several exchanges in the story) that Nora wants to get pregnant, have at least one child, how do these two intelligent professionals solve that issue (marriage I assume and a pregnancy)? If Nora is this clever Lawyer, and not the typical scum bag, it would be fascinating to read her solutions. This is your fantasy writing, dream and research what they can do in Florida or somewhere else. (not that brother/sister marriage and pregnancy is a lot of the hick areas of Florida.

I like the dominant Female and supportive mate Male story line, (I don't mean a Bitchy Mean woman over a meek male either), it's far too over-looked in the writing of Novella's, whether sexual or not. I would encourage you to continue this in some of your stories.

Great story, had me in tears at some points. I hope it continues.

Read this one quite a while back. Saw it in recently popular so read it again. I think I like it better this time. Great story. Thanks a bunch for writing.

I loved it the first time you posted it way back when, and I am grateful to have the opportunity to re-enjoy! keep up the great work!

I liked this but I ask why must the man be a door mat? Is there such a thing as mutually giving couples? I am also NOT into machismo BS either. Saw that Chancellor Cox of MN got fired today for posting some stuff he did with his wife online, what next for the porn police? Great sex should be a right like it is practiced by the bonobos where all females are agreeable and no male gets left out, great harmony in all their families as females naturally leave mom's family and prevents inbreeding atrocities.

A fabulous brother/sister love story, with great buildup and character development.

A classic, 5/5

did she get pregnant??? :)

Such a great story. I feel as though YOU are my favorite story teller. Keep up the GREAT work.

Excellent, love the pacing, the build-up, the clearing of the air from the past, and the look forward.

Nicely erotic as well

I love this story. 5/5. A follow up would be great but it is amazing as is. Thank you for reposting!!

Amazing story! I love the way you build up the story to its climax.

How could it possibly Not FIVE stars?! Wow! Even Every gal/lady/sister would/will/has loved this As much as we guys Have!! Thanks!

Wow, what a story! I had my reservations when it started with them already having had sex, the usual "taboo climax". But, having that already happened allowed for such a naughty and teasing build up. Fantastically written, naughty, seductive, taboo. As a lover of lingerie and seduction this was an amazing combination. Such a turn on, and my favorite story on here now, and I've been reading stories here for almost 15 years! Thank you so much for your work on this. An excellent story idea, perfectly executed. 5+/5

I am a re-reader and forgot to favorite your original story. I went on a deep dive to read it again, only to find out you had deleted it. I was pretty bummed about that as this was in my top 5 brother/sister stories. I have no clue how I stumbled upon it again. I guess sheer hope anytime I see a brother/sister story with lingerie. Imagine my surprise when I read your intro that this was a re-release of an old, deleted story! I still wasn't convinced because it did seem a little different at first but the more I read the happier I became. Wonderful story, talented storyteller! 5 stars from me and I remembered to tag it this time!

A wonderful story, well written, and you never felt the need to go into excruciating detail about a 10-inch dick or triple DD tits, just realistic, normal people. Many of the wannabe authors here would do well to emulate your style. Being set in Houston was an added treat, recognizing the various locations made me hope that some of the amorous couples occasionally seen were actually brother and sister.

Well done! I enjoyed this story very much.

Excellent, well-written story.

beautiful slow and sensual build up, had me leaking all the way through.

One of the best stories I've ever read!!!! You are truly a Wordsmith!

This was an incredible story. I loved every single bit. You are an incredible writer. Thanks for blessing us with your work.

I read this a couple years ago and very much enjoyed it. I didn’t know it had gotten deleted, but I’m glad it’s back!

Wonderful job on it. The starting point is quite unique for a story like this, and made for a very interesting, and satisfying read!

You qualify as a literary genius. Thank you.

Very well written, love the slow burn 🔥 nice job!

Brilliant

This is one of your best flowing stories, Eight! It never goes too slow nor too fast .Just moves steadily along like the river heading towards the massive water fall !

As many times as I have read this it always amazes me I am not reading the master work of one of our civilization ‘s acknowledged literary icons !

Now there are those who will say it is “only erotic literature”. And I would have to reply by asking who decided to rank the worthiness of any literary work by the genre’ it covered? That would be awfully short sighted. I would think it would be much more appropriate to think about how the author’s work affected the reader .

Did it move them, make them think or dream on a new or rarely reached level of intensity? Was it thought provoking so the reader was thinking about the characters and subject After finishing to story?

Obviously this story checks all those boxes and many more. It seems so very little in comparison for what you do for your reader, Eight, but all I can do is say “Thank you, Sir. Thank you so very much.”

I was totally pissed when you removed all your stories, but specifically this one. Im so glad you reposted it. Thanks!

Keep the story going love where it’s heading!!!

I think that Greg an Nor will get pregnant by Greg

Great story and one screaming for a sequel

First class story, well told by a literate writer. You ticked all the boxes, and deserve at least five stars, more if they were available.

loved this story from start tothe end. naughtily sexy, constantly teasing us.

A fantastic story. Every part was so well done and thoughtfully planned out. Sequel?

fantastic story what a great suspenseful build up and reveal

you might consider building upon the story and their lives

them have them conceive a child, sister needs to and wants to get pregnant!

Great story, hap hazard build up with unusual middle and happy ending.

It was a good spot to end as any further would or could become boring, plus the rest is for the imagination of each reader … 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 well done 😁

I love this story. I have a sister who is seven years older than me. When I was in my early thirties I went through a messy, painful divorce. My sister was worried about me and would invite me to go places and do things with her to cheer me up. Over time she confessed that her marriage wasn't what she wished it would be, and that she was spending time with me to make herself happy as well as me. She and I went out of town to a concert together. Her husband was all in favor of this. At the concert we got a bit high and had a great time. We were sharing a hotel room with separate beds. That night my sister crawled into my bed in the middle of the night, woke me and we made love. It was spectacular for both of us, unfortunately, the guilt the next day was equally spectacular. We were not very close for a long time after that. Eventually, my sister found out that her husband had a decades long affair, they divorced. Although she dated, she never found a guy that she loved again. In the meantime, I met a wonderful woman, and remarried. Six years ago, I was now in my early fifties, my wife got sick and passed away. My sister was very helpful during my wife's short illness and afterward. One night she was over my house, we had a couple of drinks and smoked a joint. We sat on the couch together, telling stories and laughing like fools. She confessed that she had feelings for me ever since the concert trip, it is why she never had another serious romance. She loved me. We cuddled but didn't make love that night. The following weekend I took her out on a proper date. We made love later that night, two months later she sold her home, I sold mine, and we bought a new home together. We've been living as a couple now for nearly five years. I'm fifty-nine, she in sixty-six and retired last year. We have a wonderful life together. Your story has similarities to my actual life. My sister and I are both fans of your writing and this is our favorite story.

Such a wonderful, loving story!!! I loved it (although I stayed up later than I should as I read it.) Well done!!!

Incredible...

Second time reading this story and I enjoyed it just as much as the first time. Good writing good story telling. Thanks for the work

Wonderful love story!!!

Great story. Loved it

Brings back so many memories, very similar - teasing, long term, growing tensions, and a frank, somewhat sudden 'talk' about what we had always wanted but afraid to lay on table. Then - it happened, Mutually agreed, appreciated. Thanks...

A great story. I remember reading it before and was happy to re-read again as the whole premise was great and cleverly written.

Well, maybe except for the intro, that struck me a bit forced. I'm not sure, but I think the earlier version had only a vague reference of what happened "back then" and think it was (or would have been) more fluid if summed up in 2-3 sentences. Then the words "The Night" are slightly overused in the early pages that might have been rephrased for a bit more variation (especially in dialogues I'd think "since... you know" would feel more natural). And then at the end, when the details of the event are unveiled feels forced again - recapping that level of detail for the whole build up (while great for the reader to get the full context) feels hardly authentic in a dialogue... Since the story is written in 1st person, I'd only keep the subjective emotions/motivations in the reply to Nora and convert the objective details of what happened into Greg's internal reminiscence.

Anyway, those are just my personal preferences and it doesn't really detract from the overall quality of your writing that deserves full 5 stars in any case ;)

Another fine story you are a good writer. I enjoyed how you slowly built up the sex and the heat for each other. Good job and it made the characters more real and fun.

What a great story, seemed at first like a slow build up, but that only enhanced it's readability. Fun to read about a dyed in the wool cock tease. He showed more restraint than I would have. Definetly a keeper. Very inspiring for new authors such as myself. Kudos!