All Comments on 'My Little Puppy'

please write some more of their story

I would be happy to read more if you intend to continue. As you hinted these are normally feline stories but your canine version worked well. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC

I came for the sex, stayed for the story and left for the scene... First time I've actually ever done that but I was actually thoroughly enthralled until she offered herself... I'd have preferred if this were slightly longer say about 4 or 5 pages and there was a promise of more in honesty but as I said, I wouldn't have stayed for the sex and thus I would have been considered an oddity amongst your readers ^_^'

@Anon-Plot

Totally agree, it needed a few more pages. People definitely underestimate a good build up to the 'climax'. Immersion. Once your locked in and you never want the story to end (even though they always do) is the best feeling.

[28.06.23]

Mucho Kawaii!

11/10!!!!!