All Comments on 'My Man in Uniform'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Nicely Done

Very detailed and nicely written. Extremely erotic and stimulating...hope to see more like it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Must be written for women like me...

This story practically involves all the things that turn me on! I literally get weak in the knees and can't speak when I see a man in uniform (esp those white Navy uniforms) WOW. And when the guy pulls her head back and kisses her neck!! That alone sends me straight into an orgasm. And don't even get me started on how that guy lasted so long..he would be a keeper! I loved this story!

-Whitney

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
I really liked this one

Very enjoyable read

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
too brief

This is a wonderful romantic story- as far as it goes. However, it could use a more extensive build up and more character development. The love scene very good, but it is rather brief, and ends somewhat abruptly, and needs to be continued. The use of the present tense is a drawback; this tense is not the proper way to narrate a story, although it has become a fad in recent years.

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