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As their love making went on they became wilder by the second. Debby now slammed her ass up and down on her brother's cock, making their bodies slap against each other. Their bodily fluids scattered around, soaking their own bodies and the mat under them even further.
"Am I... Ugh! Making you feel good... Big brother?" Moaned Debby as she grinded on her brother's cock. "You are making me feel... Really good!" She purred while licking the inside of his neck.
"You are... Oh shit! Incredible Deb... You feel so good." Responded Jake as he cupped her ass with one hand while the other mauled away at one of her perky breasts.
"I... I want to feel it deeper, I want to feel it as deep as when you went inside of me for the first time!" Moaned Debby loud before she placed her hands on her brother's chest and pushed herself up into a sitting position once more. She then started to slam her ass up and down on her brother's cock even harder and faster. She threw her head back and screamed loudly.
"Yes! Yesss! Just like this! My brother's big cock deep inside my naughty little pussy! Ooooh Yesss!" She yelled as her body crashed up and down, her bounce was even more furious because of the training mat under them. The loud slaps of body on body vibrated through the material building while their juices squirted and splattered all around them.
"Oh fuck Deb! Go on! Fuck me like you wanted to do for so long." Jake encouraged his sister even more as he watched her rock her body in full pleasure. He threw his hands up and caught both of her bouncing tits into them, he then proceeded to pinch her nipples and maul her flesh as she kept on bouncing up and down his cock.
"Yes! Touch me everywhere, grab them, knead them! Do whatever you want big brother! It feels so fucking good!" Screamed Debby as she continued to fuck her brother.
Jake knocked against her cervix with every thrust deep inside of her, this made her pussy clench even more around his shaft. His balls slapped against the back of her ass, with every bounce strings of pussy juice mixed with precum and sweat appeared and disappeared between their lower bodies.
The hard fucking between the siblings made them lose any consciousness of their surroundings, the two of them were fully focused on each other, body and soul wanting to give the other the ultimate pleasure.
Debby brought up her hands over those of her brother that were groping her breasts, her nails dug into his skin as she let out another animalistic grunt. Without ever letting go of her steady, fast and wild fucking rhythm she kept on yelling her brother's name.
"Jake! Jake! I love you! I love youuu!" She moaned in between her screams of pleasure.
Jake had witnessed his cute, little sister transform into a sex hungry minx that fucked him with everything she got. He knew she had her competitive side to her but seeing her like this blew everything out of the water, he had to admit that he loved seeing her like this, letting herself go like she had always dreamed of. It was a sight that only he would witness and no one else.
"Ughhh! Ooooh Jake! Something's coming! Oh god!" Yelled Debby to him.
He knew that she was about to cum as her vagina tightened even further around his cock, the sudden change had an instant effect on him too. He could feel that his cock started to throb and that his balls started to hurt, a clear indication for him that he too was almost at the end.
"Deb! I think I'm going to cum again, you are going to milk me if you go on like this." Moaned Jake through his clenched teeth.
"I think... I think, me too! Please... Inside of me! Shoot everything inside of meeee!" Moaned Debby back, not slowing down her movements at all.
Jake dropped his hand back down to her ass and firmly grabbed her, pushing her down harder onto his cock.
"It's coming Deb! I'm going to cum!" Screamed Jake as he felt his balls and cock expand.
"Do it! Cum in me! Let's cum together!" Yelled Debby back as she quickly let herself fall forward, back onto her brother's body. She took his head in her hands and planted a deep kiss onto his lips before the inevitable moment happened.
Jake's cock literally exploded and rapidly shot thick ropes of cum deep inside of his little sister's womb. Jake and Debby both moaned loud without letting go of their kiss. At the same time Debby's pussy convulsed and her own orgasm triggered, her whole body shook and bucked away as her juices shot out of the tiny gap where they were connected. Her pussy was drowned in cum for the first time in her life, by her own brother nonetheless.
The siblings kept their kiss connected even after the deed was done. They finally separated themselves once Jake's cock plopped out of Debby's gaping and puffy pussy with a loud squishy sound, immediately his cum started to trickle out of her over flooded cunt.
"Ohhh... Amazing, just amazing!" Moaned Debby after a while, catching her breath as she felt her brother's warm cum leaking down her thighs.
"Jesus Deb... Inside... On the first time?" Whispered a slightly exhausted Jake.
She slowly intertwined her fingers with his and pulled herself closer up to him. "I'm on the pill Jake, Mom made me use it since a long time ago... And to think that my own brother would take my virginity." She softly giggled to him.
"No regret I hope?" Asked Jake.
Debby smiled up to him and gave him a soft peck on his lips. "Never, I'm so happy that I finally... That WE finally made love together. I can't describe how happy I feel right now; I just want you to know that I truly love you Jake..."
Jake and Debby cuddled closer together. "And I love you too Deb." Responded Jake.
The two of them simply cuddled and laid close together for a while, after a short time Jake noticed that Debby was snoozing, she had fallen asleep after their intense love making.
Jake smiled to himself as he ran a hand through his sister's blonde hairs. "You really are one of a kind Deb..."
He then reached for his phone to see how late it was, because of the lack of light inside the building he had no idea how long they had been away from the party.
He turned it on and looked at the time. "One-thirty in the night... The gala is supposed to end at three so we still have some time... I guess I can let her sleep for half an hour longer before I will wake her up." Thought Jake to himself.
Just as he went to put away his phone he noticed that he had received a message. The message came from his older sister. "Casey? What would she send me at this time?" He then opened up the message and read it.
"Hey cutie brother! I hope you and Deb are having fun tonight. I'm just sending this message to remind you both that we have a photoshoot with Stephanie tomorrow morning, so don't get too shit-faced please! Also, I have a surprise just for you! Love you -xxx-"
"Dang, almost forgot about that... But a surprise for me? I wonder what she's talking about." Thought Jake to himself as he covered him and his sister with his suit jacket.
Jake looked outside the window as he held his snoozing sister close to him.
"I also wonder if Mom has anything to do with that surprise of her..."
*****
And that's the end of chapter three! I'm glad that I finally managed to finish it, my IRL situation has been very busy as of late so I had much less time to write! Please rate and comment if you would like to do so! I always appreciate it! Private messages are also appreciated; I enjoy getting responses from my readers!
Just like with this chapter, chapter four won't have a set release date. It will be done when I manage to finish it, so please look forward to it but don't get your hopes up for it to be coming soon as I have less time to write. But chapter four and eventually five will be written and published no matter what!
- COMMENTS
Gadf776 months agoLoving this quite a bit. Although it could've used a proofreader. Some words were double or left out.
TwistedOne66about 1 year agoThis series is the first of your work that I've read and I'm really enjoying it.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThere were numerous inconsistencies throughout, so I will only address the opening.
When a guy has just popped his rocks 3 or 4 time the previous day, he won't have an an erotic dream to pop his rocks.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThe first "King and Queen" of the gala decide to disappear for an hour or two right in the middle of the gala. I'm sure no one will notice.
With all four family members involved, the secret will get out sooner or later.
Especially if they continue to use the changing rooms at Maggie's as their No Tell Motel. Which is already getting a little long in the tooth.
The community that came together to gift the family 5K, will now despise and shun them. Maybe report them.
Does Jake have conscience? The only one he isn't currently cheating on is his mother, and that is only because she caught him both times. And Cynthia, the woman who was devastated by her ex-husband's indiscretions, is lying and cheating on two of her own children with with the third.
What could possibly go wrong?
rbloch66about 2 years agoYou would do well to enlist an editor. I’m guessing English is your 2nd language. I recognize the same broken English that my European parents spoke. It’s a great story, but the errors interrupt the flow. This has also been true in your earlier chapters.
Anonymousover 2 years agoAnother fine tale from this author.
It jumps around just enough to keep the story fresh while still keeping the easy flow going.
Well done, but you need a proof reader.
Bill S.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoIn my earlier post, I stated I bailed out halfway through Chapter 2. It was actually Chapter 3.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoJust too many unforced errors. in proofreading to suit me. I lost interest halfway through Chapter 2. One error was in the auto-correct of "jealous" to "jelly." But lapses in tenses, grammar, word-misuse and spelling just made the story a bit more tedious. I don't mind stories that stretch credibility, but this one was even more distracting. Maybe I will give it another try in the future, but as for now, GET A PROOFREADER! Three stars.
Lee2012over 3 years agoJust like no two fingerprints are alike, neither are human bodies (you noted that in your profile). Don’t even get me started on faces and what qualifies gorgeous, pretty, homely and fugly (fucking ugly).
Enough, if you really think hymens are ALWAYS located “at the entrance to the female body” of EVERY female, prove it, Dr _Storm. Finally, if that’s all you and your nit picking bull shiite, congrat-u-fucking-lations. I present to you the microscopic moron award.
Great series - 5*
Hragsover 4 years agoI cannot put down. Been lazy reading all day. Great story On chapter 3. On to chapter 4.
Anonymousover 4 years agoon the couples only. As I lived through this for not years but decades. Due to family mistreatment, and not just immediate family and inability to attend kindergarten, I had an extremely low self confidence when I entered first grade and it was diminished as I progressed. By the time I reached Jr. High, only one girl would even speak to me and being small, I was constantly ridiculed by the males. I learned that part of the reason I was rejected by both females and males was being from a farm family I was not suppose to have the highest IQ in the school. Although almost all of these students as well as the teachers were aware of my IQ, I was not informed. I learned of the fact that it was well known about 25 years later, when one of the students also informed me of the reasons I was rejected by the other students. My lack of confidence and the way I was constantly ridiculed were other reasons. I never attended a social event in Jr. High or Sr. High as I had no reason to want to be ridiculed or humiliated any more. During mandatory classes was enough. The school (Jr. and Sr. High) were in one building). There was enough ridicule and harassment that I chose not to eat lunch.
There were others in the school that did not fit in as well, I later learned one was a queer, several others were related so they hung out together. I guess they had their "own social groups".
I'm in my 70s and have never had a true relationship. Although I not ugly, I'd say something above average, but that's my assessment, women seem to avoid me for the most part. I did date one very attractive woman for a couple of months. The funny thing is, after she returned home, she told her fiancé (unknown to me) the wedding was off (her sister had set it up for me to date the woman). A year later when I was moving to my parents home to care for my mother and sister, I passed through that town again. I called the older sister as we had worked together, to stop and visit for a bit. Unknown to me, the woman I had dated was there visiting. We were alone for a number of hours. I'll not reveal what took place other than nothing harmful, I did learn later, she again canceled plans to many the man she had canceled on previously. She moved and asked her sister to not tell me where she then lived. She was scared of any additional emotional commitment while I was at that time confined by caring for family members.
I'd say if a woman would have taken time to get to know me, my life would have been different. But sadly, women chose to avoid me throughout my life. It began early and has followed me for more than 70 years. I expect no changes in the coming years. After so many years of being rejected socially, you loose hope and see no reason to even try any more.
Anonymousover 5 years agoWhile the story itself is a lot of fun to read, there are a lot of little things here and there... Honestly, reading the story I would almost guess that the author has never actually had sex before, heh. Take the livingroom sex for instance, cum shooting all over the room, juices all over and taking an hour and a half to clean up?? Most of the sex scenes act like the girl has a half gallon secret bladder just to squirt out juices, rofl!
Then logistics. How the hell is a guy with no leg control (or any other guy) going down on a girl in a bathtub? Is it ten feet long? Hehe. My knees are bent up already just laying back against my wife's cushy breasts, hehe.
The author seemed to forget where they were occasionally, the sofa sex again, they're doing it on the sofa, she came in and he's laid back, but at the end she's pulling her legs back on the sofa? Made no sense.
...and don't even get me started on the hymen thing! Seems like the majority of the writers I read that have some girl losing her cherry can't figure out where the hymen is. ...then theres the deal where the girl TELLS him she's a virgin and he's shoving two or more fingers in her like she isn't, ugh.
Honestly, besides the hymen thing, I can go with most all of it as poetic license:). ...oh, don't use 'vibrate' unless you have a vibrator, heh.
...anyway food for thought for future writing! Like I said, still enjoying the story, off to the next chapter!!
Anonymousover 5 years agoThere are a number of males and some females who are rejected socially. Even some who are part of a sports team, so these individuals are denied the right to participate in such an event as described herein? Just another example of how some people are not permitted to participate in life and how they are constantly ridiculed by events and physical conditions over which they have no control. Well thought out.
