All Comments on 'My Mom in Doggy Style'

Thank you I enjoyed it. I am sure with a little more details would make it better.

In my opinion,, I think you need to proofread your story or have someone read it before it goes out,,, there are mistakes in wording ,, like he was touching her pussy and it said ,, I couldn’t feel my hair ,,, it has my instead of her ,,, 3⭐️

That seriously lacked in almost every way possible. Get a better hobby.

Clearly you don’t know what doggie style is lol

Wow! 23 and still living with mommy and daddy. What a guy! NOT!!

Great story for 1st one, look forward to more .

Good effort that, as others have said, require a Proof Reader. With the added edit, your style will become more 'American.' This will make for a more comfortable read for the followers you will attract.

You started of great with a nice buildup, then it was him ducking her and done. You should have expanded the sex scene more, as well as the ending.

Could use some editing

Probably one of the worst stories I've ever read