All Comments on 'My Mom the BBC Shemale and My Wife'

wonderful story. please make next one a bit more masculinization and slow transformational.keep it up

WHY do you censor Family and Brother? That is just silly.

DONKEY DICK!

A chapter 2 would be interesting. Does Mother continue with daughter in law after giving birth? Does mother explore other women (now that she's become an alpha)? Maybe son gets a similar hormonal imbalance & competes with mother!

This could be extremely hot and a chapter two would be fantastic. But this story needs editing and a strong grammatical rewrite fairly bad.

The idea is intriguing but your writing is simply god-awful. Filled with grammatically inept errors & just written with no basic sense of the English language.

Hubby gets instantly cut out of the mix since he was the one caring for everyone's feelings and we'll being. Turned me off instantly. Would have preferred the happy threesome.

Story is so badly written that it's painful to read. The characters are ridiculously unrealistic. I applaud people attempting to present stories but this was completely inane.

Your story ain't that of a barracuda!

It's so fuckin' bad it's more like something buy a guppy or a minnow.

Take the hint, pally!

Yarracuda boy are you a twit

Your big time story really bites the shit!

East is east and west is west

Y'all couldn't pass a LITERACY TEST!!

Please write more like this !

I loved this. Please continue u are the best. Just don't write (*) in the wrong words. They are used to mask obscenity. Plus this is literotica my dear. Post more.

This is the first story that forced me to stroke my 6 inch tool

The last line gave chills down my spine. Amazing work buddy