All Comments on 'My Mom's Corruption Ch. 04'

Good work, i can´t wait for the fallout haha

I can’t wait for ch 5 I wanna know what happens next to badly!

We need to do a recap of the first time they had sex. But thanks from giving it her pov

Can't wait to see what comes next!!!

For whatever reason, I just love stories like this; very neo-noir when a mother, THE woman of any boy's life, succumbs to moral failings with the best of intent, and gives herself to the nemesis of her own beloved child!

All compounded with said bully using her good intent not just for his own gratification, but also to further humiliate his prey.

I'm eagerly anticipating to see how Seth makes her succumb, not to mention how far Monica will let him go (characters described with a "bubble-butt" usually get taken from-or-in behind). Her willpower is already crumbling, as this mechanic has her eye on his swinging tool!

i am really following this story with interest and it's really good. it's just that how does the build up between Seth and the mom happen before the trip? it seems he has some sort of control over her through talking but she seems to be really resistant, how did he figure out he could influence her slightly with statements? was it shared over mechanics project and she slowly became more feminine and ditzy?

please write more about the previous build up.

Im glad everyone likes ch04.

Tge build-up happened he bought her that necklace as I said in ch03. She waa also starting to wonder why Seth ONLY picked on Doug.

The reason is quite obvious on fact. He's just jealous if him having a mother. Of being raised by such a strong and sexy woman. Which ill explain more in Ch05.

In THIS chapter Im working on. This will be the first time they had sex. But not the last yime either. At this point...its only a matter of time.

Where's the sex? The build up is too slow

I said this chapter would be the "build-up" for chapter 5. Monica is hesitant to do anything sexual with Seth. Find out in Chapter 5.

How far away is chapter 5 from publication?

Also the way Doug was treated via text was great as it appeared “events” were happening. Will there be more of this in the future. Please do it.

I need more! Great work so far.

Leggo bro chop chop

Makes less sense than Johnny Sins home videos. The "seduction" is basically non-existent. They slept naked? How did that happen? The whole thing makes zero sense

You’re killing us man! Cmon

I agreed with one comment below. Where's prologue? How did they awaking naked? How did he seduced her? That makes no sense maan :/

She got hit by a martian slut ray again ?

Should have been a chapter on how Seth seduced Monica like how the previous chapter implied.

Monica and Seth should have had shower sex after Seth took pictures of Monica in a bikini.