All Comments on 'My Mother, Aunt and I'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More chapters, aunt & mom explore each other andahot threesome for a 3rd chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

An 'Average' rating is almost too generous.

You need assistance to make your work more smoothly for North American readers.

The sentences are immature and the expanse of N.A. vernacular very limited.

I do, however, applaud your efforts. The story line is a basic point from which to enter the pornographic writing hobby. First your Mom, then a close, we'll known family member. What could be better?

Please read lots of offerings on Literotica.com as these will assist in further developing a smonth flow to even greater sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Too short.good fucking with auntie.a round of fucking with mom would have been good. Spent a week alone with my aunt and we fucked every day several times each day.. Some not pussy she had

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I hope he will be fucking his mother again, it is so great and beautiful. I was 16 when I fucked my lovelly mother it happened eigth months after my father passed away.

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