by Briterotic
I loved the series. I loved that there was only one guy involved and that they ended up together. I also liked that the women didn't pair up turning the guy into a human dildo like some authors do and that's something I hate. The only thing I didn't like was the D/S but as it wasn't heavy, I didn't mind too much. All in all, 4,5*, but rounding, I gave 5*.
After first story,, I didn’t think you could get better. Well you did. Do have one question, if Rebecca is a barrister who mainly does criminal cases in courts, find all the leisure time to be home on a standard time most days. In USA criminal lawyers put in long hours.
Hi Whitewaterbum, Thanks for your feedback, it’s much appreciated. The Rebecca character is a solicitor specialising in employment law. That’s a world away from being a barrister in criminal law. I invented a character in another story (Fiona in ‘A Mother: Tempted and Seduced’) who was a criminal law barrister. If you’ve read that story, it’s possible that you’ve confused the two. Thanks again.
A fitting conclusion to a wonderful fantasy. Beautifully written and constantly engaging.
I was actually disappointed when you made a sub sissy out of him. Though he wound up with all three. Should be a third chapter and the master take control. Three pregnant seems to work.
4/5 not as good as chapter 1, l didn’t like the mother making a sissy of her son whilst dominating him sexually. It ruined the story.
I’d much prefer him to being a Master to the three woman instead. He should marry all three of them and keep them in a D/s relationship. Including discipline.
He should breed both Madelein and Lauren.
And if he can do so, get his mother pregnant as well.