All Comments on 'My Mother the Cum Whore Pt. 01'

What an awesome story so far so sexy n hot had me horny n hard reading it can’t wait to read more parts

I'm definitely looking forward to reading part 2!

Started off good and well paced and then suddenly it started to fee! Very rushed 4 stars for for lack of patience

I’d like to see where this goes, but as others have said, maybe tease out the conflict a little longer or have the act play out longer

Switch is on, great start..... I smell some hard ass fucking cuming

The story's in third person. It didn't affect the score, but I see this over and over, and it really doesn't make any sense.

This randomly switches between past and present tense. A good example are these two paragraphs. The first is past tense and the second is present tense. Pick ONE.

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"Since you started this, you owe me your cum now. Anytime anywhere I want it, you have to feed me." Kara said sternly to her son.

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"I wish I had spoken up sooner." Robby says

The storyline is fine but the tense is mixed up and the language awkward. Makings of a good story, here

WOW you made me nut 100% HOT

Fun little story, keep going.

love it... Love It... LOVE IT...!

With a closet Cum Whore for a Mother who just remembered that she loves to suck hard cocks and can't wait to enjoy all of his "Warm Son Cum"

What's not to like. I'll read all of these chapters and be left wanting for more...

One of the hottest stories ever.