All Comments on 'My Mother the Stripper Ch. 06'

I just ran into your story, and I can tell you I love the build-up! I would rate 5 Stars, but for the time between updates. Something is taken away from 6 month intervals, I could easily loose track of your story. That said,

your story line is believable and hot! I would suggest some smoking and drug use as strippers are far from

angels. They live their lives with these types of pleasures at excess. Great work, and Thank-You for it. The

story is most enjoyable, but sparse.

Won't somebody please explain to the author the difference between "woman" and "women".

Interesting set-up and novel audition.

A few almost consistent type errors. I have harvested a few examples :

The other women took great turn . . . their turns, to stay in plural format. Or, perhaps, Another woman took . . . Staying in singular format.

Highlighting the need for proof reading seems my most frequent concern. You, and you are not alone in this, need to properly proof read your work. Or, have someone do it for you. Or have a strong editor go over it before publication.

The small things do make the big difference. You very obviously have a penchant for this genre. Please produce more as I am quite sure I am not alone in waiting for more.

I think the storyline is excellent the way it is. And yes some stippers are either drug users or alcoholic or dysfunctional but the mom was level head and she knew what she was doing that why other strippers shunned her when they were in the diner.

please write more of this story. I can't wait for more of this story

Sexcellent Series!

11/10 Acrylic Cocks!!!!!

Please continue this story