by LotsToShare
Made my dick hard but the story must be considered farce as no one can be this stupid.
Hope we get more.
But some bridging between this chapter and the previous would have been nice
NIIIIIIIICE. I really enjoyed your first one! You really have a talent for making these stories like craptainplanet. They give me the same feelings and vibes. Can’t wait for any potential more!
As someone who loved the original stories, thank you for continuing them in this way... It's awesome.
I agree with anonymous below. No one can be as ignorant and naive as Steve. Otherwise a very enjoyable story so far.
Those who say Steve can't be that naive, there are plenty of stories of believable naivety, this pushes things into the unbelievably naive realms which is a less covered genre and one of my favourites. Another great story.
Continue please! Maybe a bridge between the first and second chapter like the other commenter said. Or peek into what happened the first time Steve and Sandy had sex. Maybe more risky sneaky scenes where Deb is very oblivious, like while Deb is in the other room, or Steve is on a call with Deb. Threesome with Deb and Sandy but Steve favors Sandy just a little bit more, Deb gets jealous and Steve doesn't understand why.