All Comments on 'My Neighbor and My Pool Pt. 02'

Wonderfully erotic story. Please continue.

Loved the story. Anatomy tip for future reference: the G-Spot is at the top of the vagina; not the bottom. Pushing down with the thumb against a finger in the rectum may feel good but will entirely miss the G-Spot.

So very, very wonderful! Sweet, Sexy, Fun. Sure wish it had happened to me. You DO realize that your story has some great legs and a long way to go yet.

I enjoyed the story, you paint some good pictures. However, I found the reading a little hard going because of your almost Victorian style of writing and rather stilted dialogue. Try to be lighter and more conversational, it will make for better stories.

I love this story

When I read this and the previous chapter, all I could think of was the vast amount of:

"MY DEAR LOVER, I AM A WIDOW WHO HAS COME INTO A SUM OF MONEY..."

scam emails.

PART 3 PLEASE!

as in the first part, make the verbage less gushy ... the story is good

OK time for part 3. Keep it flowing!

Enjoyed the story and could see Sarah showing up following another bad episode with the boyfriend for some more consolation and/or counseling. I thought your writing improved but could still do with a few less 'dears' for my taste. It also seems like you addressed Sarah's body issues but I would like to have seen the boyfriend's poor behavior addressed too. Good effort and I look forward to more!