by ToSexorNotToSex
These chapters are just too F'ing short. I need longer chapters. I simultaneously like the voyeur angle and don't like it at the same time. Maybe they start doing doubles together. Maybe they can start doing women together? Threesomes together? Think about all the angles you could go with and follow that one angle if you haven't yet. Does her watching Lia be with these people make her jealous? Or Does it make her want to join in? I think you asked the prior and latter question and answered it perfectly with "too many conflicting feelings" Alice is confused and I think that's a very realistic feeling anyone might have after seeing that.
Kissing scenes are so underrated. It takes all of my willpower not to just write three pages of making out because I love them so much.
As always, thanks for the support. I've been thinking about uploading non-sex stories over at my Patreon, but I dunno.
Didn't know how I was going to feel going into this, but I actually find myself loving this series. More please
I really like the combo of the innocence and kink angle. Amazing story. Can't wait to read more!