All Comments on 'My New Best Friend'

What a piece of shit! What ever you were smoking when you tried to write this is something you should flush down the toilet. I never knew you could write such trash.

The story suffers from some editing issues, such as abrupt changes in POV. The concept is "out there," but that's hardly unusual for Literotica! <g>

I think a revision, with the assistance of an editor, would really improve this effort. I could also see this story in "Loving Wives," depending on changes. The deceptions may be a little jarring for "Romance."

... in this story is quite a bit creepier than in most stories in the incest category. I agree with the protagonist that Michael needs help. Good read.

- but not in a bad way...

It just kept getting more complicated and then was nicely tied into a good conclusion.

I did not finish the last page, it was too crappy. Neither did I give you a bad mark, I don't do that except for willing cuckold stories or stories where the author gets the names of the characters mixed up for a few paragraphs. Those I give a one rating. I just left your rating off. I can't see anything to like.

what a total fucked up story all about raving lesbians and dykes....how nasty is that.....they should all be whipped....