All Comments on 'My New Girl? Ch. 02'

I had tears running down my face as I read this tender love story. For someone who doesn't normally write these types of stories you have captured the essence of true love. I can't wait for chapter 3.

A truly touching and wonderful story! I anxiously await chapter 2.

I can't wait to read more. It's like a modern day fairy tale.

you continue to tell a really nice "love" story. Can't wait to see where you might take it from here. I'll be watching for chapter 3.

A fantastic story so far. I've enjoyed it and look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation. You have a way of writing that is very creative and easy going. A Joy!!!!

Great story,,i liked the part about her wearing pantyhose and how he knew how to be carefull with them as i to wear them and am OBSESSED with them,,,if you can will you try to work pantyhyose into future stories??

yes please contiune on wounderfull story

Thank you all for your wonderful comments! I can't believe how well this story is being received though I am very pleased. I have to say that this story just about wrote itself. Steve and Jamie seem to be like real people to me. I agree that this story is outside my usual fare but I am a sucker for romance as well and this story is a result of that. I really appreciate the comments and the time you all took to read my story so far. I hope you continue to like where the story goes. Also, I hope you take the time to VOTE!

9/20/2011 5PM CDT

Wonderful loving story. Keep writing.

great story-glad he loved her-exciting sex scenes too thanks

I wanted to give you a comment when I was through with the series, but I just couldn't wait. So right now, I will give you one .

First, I like to start by saying that I am straight female college student. I started reading gay romance stories a couple of months ago. To be honest, as a straight female girl, I assume that I would not be able to relate to gay characters in the aspects of their romance. However, after seeing two of my favorite male characters being paired up as romantic couples in a fan-made comic, is when my love affair began. At first I was mad seeing two of my favorite characters being paired up when the have zero romantic feelings for one another, but after a while, I saw sweet fan pictures of them together and I came to term with my feelings...I'm in love! Then, it led me to read romantic FanFiction.net stories of them. While I was reading the stories and despite the two characters being gay, I saw that I was able to relate with the feelings and emotions and even with the sex scenes - I was aroused. I realized that love emotion is the same for anyone's sexual orientation. Don't misunderstand, I'm not saying that I am barley being supporter for the LBGT community because I have always been a supporter ever since I was a child. However, I thought I would not relate the love emotion as I would with straight couples when it came to writing, but it all changed. I'm so glad I came across the fan-made comic book, I would have missed out on the beauty of love diversity being spread word by word.

At first, I read gay stories and now, I'm recently reading transsexual stories. And like I said before, I'm loving the romance.

This is my third transsexual story and so far it is my favorite. I found the part funny when Jamie's mother brought the dad to the conversation. I imagine the mother have this loud funny tone to her calling her husband and then she said Gene and I laughed. Oh, also, I loved the part where Jamie got up and Steve grabbed her hand and stating internally how she might be feeling. It was very deep.

Finally, I want to give you constructive criticism. Though I am not majoring in any form of writing, I am a avid reader and writer. First, you have punctuation errors but don't worry who hasn't. My advise is that you should always re-read your work. Second, you have great transition. You did not give pointless information that gives the writing a dragging feel to it.

Before I go and read chapter 3, I would love to say something. I went to visit your page and saw a list a of other stories. I wont be reading your other stories because I think your characters have orgies or having threesome sex or more. I respect what goes on behind close doors - everyone has the right, it truly doesn't bother me. But I just like the aspect of love between two people - eye to eye, lips to lips, secretes only the person in front of you knows. I also saw that your characters might be involved in cheating. I don't mind reading extramarital affairs but I just don't like the idea where the person who cheated lives happily ever after and leaves the spouse to suffer without owning up to his or her actions. As long as the character explains their cheating and owns up to his or her actions I am fine. Kind of like in the movie called "Unfaithful" starting Richard Gere and Diane Lane. Though this does not apply to you, but I'm just glad you did not write about incest on your other stories because if you had I would have stop reading this story even though if it didn't have incest. Despite being a girl who has respect for people, I do not respect incest and I am very vocal on the matter. Incest is immoral and traumatizing for any individual. Furthermore, I have done research on the subject. Once I visited the author's page and saw the category in their other stories had incest, I had to stop reading the story that I was currently reading from them - even though it did not have incest. I did not want to associate myself with them. I have a strong belief. Finally, I don't want to rant and bring negativity to your positive review so I will stop now.

One last thing. I don't want to tell you what to write and what not to write but you should really stick to romance, you are really good - not just gay stories but transsexual. You should bring the drama and passion of what makes up romance between two people. Another tip: you should find what type of audience you are targeting. You should write ranging from young adults to the adult aspects. I recommend you read young adult and adult romantic novels and see how the author write drama, suspense, and love into the mix. Also, as any writer, you need to do research, really get to know your characters. Most importantly, know from the beginning your story plot.

P.S. you should really write about male pregnancy. Also, I just notice how long my review is. I hope you read it. :)

Holy damn, this is hot. I love seeing trans stories from someone who actually understands us like this. <3