All Comments on 'My New Life Ch. 11'

I must have forgotten to run spell check before posting.

Posting a corrected version soon.

Wow! I definitely didn't run spell check. Never was a good speller but no excuse for blowing it this badly. Just posted an edited version.

Very nice story, anymore updates in the works?

I am working on Chapter 12 now. Probably in a couple of days or so.

Patiently waiting, not! Oh where, oh whare has this great story gone?

In spite of occasional spelling and grammatical errors, this is great Romance storytelling. The difference between Romance and Erotic Couplings is perfectly shown by this romantic chapter. Tender love scenes, passion, affection, drama, a great plot, and so much more are to be found in this chapter of what is truly a magnificent series- a superb love story in every way. Five stars.

I made it through 11 chapters. Waaay too much sex at the end. I started skipping through the bulk of the story just to follow the (non erotic) story line. But this last chapter pretty much lost my interest. Great writing though.