All Comments on 'My New Neighbour Heard Me'

this is a good story but it was too short and could have gone into more detail.

You might be playing with character, I'm not sure, but the use of "coloured person" stamps the reader right out of any sympathy or engagement. The whole contrivance of these characters uniting over having lost their partners that way is pretty unpleasant tbh. Leave it, it distracts from the writing.

Use of word coloured made me stop reading. This day in age ...terrible word choice!

What a strange comment. Obviously someone who sees things only in black and white.

Naiome Campbell recently spoke of women of colour - is that offensive?

Sorry, I couldn't finish reading this - your poor English put me right off. Get yourself an editor if you can't do better than this.

coloured lol just got jerk off trolled

guessing english isn't your first language. there were some parts of this I had to read twice to try to figure out. After the fourth paragraph of this, it wasn't worth the effort