All Comments on 'My New Pet Elf Ch. 04'

It was taken down because its against Literotica rules to have copyrighted characters in non-consent situations. Not to fret, I posted it on Adultfanfiction.net. Look under "Games", "S-Z", "Starcraft".

A good read until the last 4 or so paragraphs. C'mon - give the bride a few days with the groom before "Pact"...

The bride and groom have at least nine months before she goes out on pact :)

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

this is a great story. Love it. AAAAAA+++++

Your imagination is awesome!

My only complaint is that "you're" is short for "you are."

"Your" is the word you wanted. It confers ownership.

Sorry to be a grammar nerd, but it changes the meaning if you get it wrong.

Otherwise, a 5-star story, throughout. Thanks for sharing.