All Comments on 'My New Pet Elf Ch. 05'

Sad to hear this series to end soon

hate to see this story end enjoyed reading it

As with all great stories they sadly all have to end

Maybe just one more so we can see the happy bit with John and and the Elf Queen? It would be great to see John, Jason and all the elf pets together happy.

You should keep writing. Your good.

o please......do continue this series.....its just plain waaaay toooo cool to be ended with just one more chapter......hehe.....5/5

Moar! MOAR NAOW WE NEED MOAR! PLEASE

This series if too great to just stop...please keep writing more!!

I woulda had him wish for immortality as a loophole to keep the two of them!

Definitely an amusing take on the subject. Nice story!

All the slutty, tight pussies you can get without having to answer to any woman, but also always the one who has the bigger cock than all those elf husbands.

Not to mention, all the elf women are hot and they only care about cock to the point that they're willing to become lifelong sex slaves.

It's definitely not a literary piece, but it does its job in delivering on the sex scenes and fanservice purely for getting someone off.

Writing-wise, there are some oddly placed quotation marks on certain sentences that aren't part of the dialogue, but that's nothing some editing can't fix.

Great story , love it. AAAAAA+++++

Imaginative, funny, sexy. I hope you continue the series.