by dondave
Beautiful build up to the ultimate conversion. This needs a sequel
Thanks for the feedback. Starting Part 2 soon, once I figure out where I want to go :)
Very enjoyable read, nicely paced. Looking forward to additional installments.
Nice first installment to what appears to be a very nice Love story. Hope there will be many more chapters to this saga.
Loved it, would love to have the opportunity to do the same. Well written, wondering where it goes next
Good story, believable with nice character development and the right amount of intimacy.
A really nice story. Hope there is more to follow. And great to find the sex following the falling in love rather than the other way round.
I don't normally read Gay stories but the description caught my eye and glad I did read it.
Good character development and it took time to do so.
Thank you for a good read!
Love this from beginning to end. I hope there is going to be more!
Fantastic story! I really hope we get more chapters. Very soon.
This was such a good story, I can't wait to see what happens next
Since Rob is clean-shaven, I am hoping Dave has some body hair -- certainly pubes, and maybe even a bit of hair for his chest and abs. Great story!
Terrific story! Loved Dave watching the gay video and masturbating….
I believe Dondave is a great writer!! Don't know how he did it, but he managed to pull my story right out of my heart!! The descriptions of what Dave was thinking, the questions he asked himself were insightful an heart-rending. Both Dave and Rob were ME!
My friend, keep writing. You are fantastic! Oh, and so's your story. Blue-balls all the way!!!
Too intentional, it seem like Rob invited someone over to compete with his new roommate out of jealousy and to turn him. None of this was done by coincidence. 1 star