All Comments on 'My New Roommate'

by dondave

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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyabout 5 years ago
A great conversion

Beautiful build up to the ultimate conversion. This needs a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great start

I hope there’s going to be a part two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
whew

damn that was hot

Csucker64Csucker64about 5 years ago
Mmm

Absolutely brilliant - more please

dondavedondaveabout 5 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback. Starting Part 2 soon, once I figure out where I want to go :)

Eros_epochEros_epochabout 5 years ago
Loved it

Very enjoyable read, nicely paced. Looking forward to additional installments.

FitGuy47FitGuy47about 5 years ago
A Love Story

Nice first installment to what appears to be a very nice Love story. Hope there will be many more chapters to this saga.

tobytimtobytimabout 5 years ago
Great

Loved it, would love to have the opportunity to do the same. Well written, wondering where it goes next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wonderfully engaging!

Good story, believable with nice character development and the right amount of intimacy.

lindierlindierabout 5 years ago
Two great guys fall in love.

A really nice story. Hope there is more to follow. And great to find the sex following the falling in love rather than the other way round.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Excellent story I really enjoyed it . Hope there's more to cum :)

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLabout 5 years ago
Great story!

I don't normally read Gay stories but the description caught my eye and glad I did read it.

Good character development and it took time to do so.

Thank you for a good read!

kittycat1986kittycat1986about 5 years ago
Great story

Love this from beginning to end. I hope there is going to be more!

circleofcandlescircleofcandlesabout 5 years ago
More!!!

Fantastic story! I really hope we get more chapters. Very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More please

This was such a good story, I can't wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Dave and Rob

Since Rob is clean-shaven, I am hoping Dave has some body hair -- certainly pubes, and maybe even a bit of hair for his chest and abs. Great story!

Eros_epochEros_epochover 4 years ago
Please finish if possible

Would really appreciate if you completed part 2.

RobJasperRobJasperabout 4 years ago
Terrific story!

Terrific story! Loved Dave watching the gay video and masturbating….

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

excellent. sort of hope Catilyn stops by again

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I believe Dondave is a great writer!! Don't know how he did it, but he managed to pull my story right out of my heart!! The descriptions of what Dave was thinking, the questions he asked himself were insightful an heart-rending. Both Dave and Rob were ME!

My friend, keep writing. You are fantastic! Oh, and so's your story. Blue-balls all the way!!!

dondavedondaveover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for this ^^^^^!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Too intentional, it seem like Rob invited someone over to compete with his new roommate out of jealousy and to turn him. None of this was done by coincidence. 1 star

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