All Comments on 'My Newlywed Neighbours'

Nice story.

It was well written, no obvious grammar mistakes, nothing that pulled me out of the story.

It was, in my opinion, in the wrong category. Would have better suited to Loving Wife's although they generally hate cuckold stories there too.

I shan't vote because I recognize my dislike doesn't take away from the skill of writing.

@Wrexscar.

Thank for for your measured comment. Not all are so generous.

I have been heavily criticised in the past for posting my stories in Loving Wives - not that I'm too bothered.

Hi Gina.

I love your attitude to life.

I live in a country where public nudity is deeply unwelcome. I go bare whenever I'm in a place where it's acceptable - generally in the Med. But I rarely travel now - can't justify the carbon budget.

I liked your story.......I'd liked the tempting in the garden but would have preferred a slightly slower more descriptive build up towards the end. A.