by hottest_indian_guy
"Anonymous
LOL, I didn't know Hunter Biden wrote porn."
Ahhh a republican - all the thanks to your state-approved carer for telling you how to spell the hard words.
Wow a WHOLE 7 INCHES. Indians must have tiny penises if that's something to brag about.
this is the most awful thing i've read in a while and i didn't get very far at all, just, bad, extremely so
Why'd he ring the doorbell for his own home and why would they need a 20 yr old babysitter if he's home
Am I the only one who wondered why he thought he was "blessed" to only have a 7 in dick?
There is much work to be done with this. A very hard read with errors. When an author pleads for support at the end of the story it is a BIG turn off.
Abortion, cut uncles neck in his sleep after raping him with giant dildo and become gay, but i'm evil so haha.
I am confused. Why would this couple hire a baby-sitter if the dad was going to be home? Is that an Indian cultural thing?
Other than that, nice story. It needs a bit of an edit, but that's par for the course.
make the second part where lisa has the baby and she wants to have sex again and have another baby
you should definitely get your next story edited because this one wasn't very well written with typos that made the story seem like it had been written by a child. but you make up for it with the story truly sticking to the non-consent/reluctance genre.
There are not many stories on here of true non-consentual sex. Thank you for staying true to the genera.
What a tired old drab of a silly story with no substance and a common stupid recurring theme, lol!
You'd think that if you were going to criticize other people's work you'd know how to spell grammar.
Please write about the Uncle fucking her pregnant pussy and drinking her breast milk.
Gave this three stars because I doubt it was written by an India man as there are too many poor referances. Next time recommend letting the audiance know that this is satiricle.
forget the criticism... your work is great but yeah it need little improvement..... cheers
Typical indian garbage rotten grammer, spelling, and use of words not known outside of their small localized area. Such junk should be removed and future stories required to be fully edited.