All Comments on 'My Niece Simone Ch. 05'

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myassisdraginmyassisdraginalmost 12 years ago
Another typo...

In the second last paragraph you got the two girls names mixed up again......

Easy to do when you have two with similar names.

Minor mistake but noticable.

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