All Comments on 'My not so Hesitant Mother'

Get an editor. Thanks for sharing.

I got as far as ‘nine inch cock’

Bye!

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited sex.

You jump all over the place, with no clear track of where your story is going. It doesn't even pass basic English.

Not kinda bad, really bad. Rethink writing.. Then slap yourself like the unnamed character poorly written about slaps his mothers hip with his yeah.... original "9 inch cock"

somehow check ages of people submitting their writing.

This is clearly written by an immature young person who lacks even enough education to write his/her A B C's!

I'm sorry I even opened this submittal, let alone even read the first few paragraphs.

Shame on Literotica! SHAME!

And I will not expose my name to this trash!

sounds like a great mom

There are so many things wrong with this submission I don't know where to start the critique. Is English your second language? Third?

What are you 15? Story was awful, lost direction of what you were writing. aNSqu

I'm thinking if you fleshed out your backstory more and give more depth to your characters and thier real motivations you could have something here. For instance why is the mother so easily ready to become submissive to the son. Why is the son not struggling with his morality. I think that the basic who and most importantly why is missing some real polish. Don't give up just try to make it deeper so when you get to them Finally getting together it means more than a wham bam thank you ma'am type of story.

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The goal is to paint a picture in the mind for therapeutic reasons as we most know, many who have such urges just need an outlet as to save others from their taboo subconscious

Pretentious, therapeutic

Put your thesaurus away!

Learn to write and accept criticism

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