All Comments on 'My Only Talent Ch. 47'

I have to say that I'm not enjoying this story so much anymore. Too many secondary characters that don't really contribute to it, in my opinion. Like, Suzanne was a main character, but then she left Robbie's 'sphere of influence' and I stopped caring about her. Her activities to find herself quite frankly bored me, and I skipped over them completely. The same with Chrissy screwing around with Big Bones. I didn't find it made any difference to the main story-line, so I moused ahead to find where Robbie came back. I may keep reading, just out of a sense of loyalty (after all, I've made it 47 chapters so far), but my interest is waning.

So how long till the "GAMES" begin. Love this story line. Keep it coming. 5 Stars.

I’ve found myself rereading the story from the beginning several times over the past 8 years. Even created an ebook version to track the key plot lines and characters.

Thanks for sharing this, looking forward to much more as these characters continue to grow.

I loved the first 20 or so chapters of this storyline but I believe your cast of characters got away from you. You do an ex wouldn't job of flushing out each of their stories for sure, but spiralling them all back together in one lead up chapter this way to come back full circle tends to leave a reader dizzy. Not to mention, it's entirely implausible that there is no one in the entire circle vehemently against Suzanne's implied redemption. Well written but a few items are killing your edge. 4 *'s

Eagerly awaiting to see how this intervention with Suzanne goes and if all the players involved gain a little catharsis

FUCKEM Ass? Unicorn? Couldn't come up with a different U word? Fuck me. Page one and that's what I remember about this installment. Hilarious.

Шикарное произведение. Надеюсь, что окончание уже скоро и автор не разочарует нас) творческих ему успехов и скорейшего написания того, через что пройдёт Сюзанна для расплаты за все свои действия. Особенно Робби должен оторваться на ней за все то, через она его провела!

James, thanks for your email. Glad that you are on the improve.

There are too many story lines left adrift. Good luck with the editing

It's nice to see this story back on track. As much as I want to see Robbie get his Suzie back, it'd be even better if Suzanne picked Robbie and the girls again instead of Mike... Thank you for sharing this with us!

This story is sailing along in choppy seas and at some point begins to sink. Surviving characters jump in the life boat and row away. The author pops to the surface in his submarine and fires a torpedo into the stern just below the water line and as the life boat sinks he waits for the readers to comment.

Wow

Tons happening, liking most of it

Great to see u back

A really like this story!

You are back to your best.

I ain't buying "The BIG U TURN" and have to conclude that I must be the only long term reader still reading and commenting because no one has pointed out the drastic change in story continuity. Nothing like possibly getting crotch rot of the mouth to make a story interesting. Right.

I can not believe anyone having read this story from the beginning is buying the last three chapters.

Yes Robbie lost his Susie. Is the author equating this as also losing his brain. Is Robbie now a blithering idiot?

Robbie who has been all about low risk hook ups has now lost his brain and does not accept that std s exist. STD s have been implied from the beginning.

He worry's about Melanie's meltdown episode, Millie's gang bang fantasy, May Ling's Air tight express and steers Big Bones (A pro football player who chases groupies and cougars. Keven only hears from him when he wants to bang sluts at the condo) away to turn around and embrace the idea of him shooting off in Chrissy's mouth with no protection. So Robbie thinks nothing about the risk to him self, Lara and pregnant Nora, from oral std s. " Yea right.' In who's universe does Big Bones not sound like a high risk hook up.

Now in chapter 47 you are back peddling. Chrissy now wants to see Big Bones health certificate. Wow this is like checking to see the gun is unloaded after shooting yourself in the foot or putting your foot on the brake after you have crashed into the car in front of you.

Cause Chapters 45-46 are not likely to make the MC top 250

The intervention is sounding more like the original authors work. Guess you could pull a rewrite to edit out this faux pas and blame it on the corona virus, drinking beige, Alzheimer's or some other BS the readers will except as long as continuity is restored.

Robbie turning into an uncaring ass hat don't cut it.

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F U C K E M ... OH! lol

The whole naming scene - WR = Warren Randolph = Womb Rat - just cracked me up.

Aha! Now we see how you are going to pull Robbie into the net of various sub-plots that you've been so carefully weaving. Well, he'll try to pull him in... I do wonder how much of a clusterfuck Suzanne will become/make of things.

I don't remember Nora being so domestic before, is this a "nesting thing"?

Holy Shite! You really are tying things together - Multi-marriage + the Kincaids? wow

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Domestic efficiency, project manager style.

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HAH! This is fantastic! There is so much going on here, so many months of training, classes, experience and yes, even the foundation of the Signal. And yet, you don't key on Signal Feedback at all. Robbie is just getting that good at doing the mental/physical/emotional gymnastics needed to accomplish what truly is an amazing feat. And give both of them satisfaction and connection while doing so. I know it's fantasy, but this is Really Impressive stuff, well done!

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"Yes, and I still do. But I know I can never trust her or be with her again. She is all yours."

Carmencita could not stop a little tear running down her cheek.

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Oh... wow, I know that this is an emotionally charged moment, but I'm wondering if Robbie is 'broadcasting' now?

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She needed to find another fuck buddy. Did she need to tell Mike about the new one?

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This, along with the giddiness she felt at her future plan to emotionally and spiritually crush Stephen as her end goal reminds me of how little I agree with Robbie's assessment that Suzanne is "basically morally sound". This bitch is broken in her core thinking... not 'sound'.

*SO Confused!*

Why would Clancy go through all of that trouble - with what you are telling us is legit feelings for Chrissy - and then blow his own dick off by going straight to a strip-club?

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He waxed philosophical. "What a family! I guess that is what it would be like if you were married to someone that smart, that hot, and that freaky. Big upsides and big downsides!"

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This made me laugh and remember the "Hot/Crazy" graph... I'm not sure why I didn't make this connection before? :D

Well, there is no question in my mind that you're a master at the long game. A lot of folks bitch that they don't care about the side-plots that don't directly involve Robbie, so they skip them... and they they bitch because those side-plots now very much involve Robbie - and the girls!

One observation: You've stopped giving us any explicit sexual episodes, even involving Robbie with Nora and/or Lara. I get the pulling back from those details with all that is going on, but to stop completely is a disappointment. Yes, I know that next chapter is going to be a kinky sexual overload, but, that will all be in the context of punishment and emotional catharsis. I miss Robbie and the girls making love.

This chapter was amazing. I couldn't stop reading.

The questions all i have are questions this chapter only muddies the water about so many things. Why has Robbie turned into that guy? Why would lara want to help period? Nora? The f. Shes okay with this? I've read and enjoyed but the violent 180 of feature characters i dunno i think i might have to unfavorite this story line sorry but i Can't see how this will turn out well at all

He used to an Alpha Male.

Sharing your girl, whether it's only in fantasy is the time you become Beta Male.