All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Well Done!

Like the clever writing—a good example: “Well, I knew a little about trying to keep up with him, but I liked the effect it had on me.” The reader shares Heather’s excitement in anticipation of what will come next. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
<3 <3 <3

This is my favorite story. I love playing with ice. ;)

joodlejoodleabout 12 years ago
Beautiful

I love submissive tales that have a fairytale way about them. This is the perfect balance for me of love and domination.

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