All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 17'

I am very excited for this upcoming trip! I can't wait to see what happens.

I absolutely love all of your stories! I can't wait to find out what happens in the next one!

Can't wait for the next story!

i dont know if i have read better please please keep going i will keep reading whilst you keep submitting ha ha.

Although I have voted often I would be remiss in commenting on the story so far. Although as Erotica it sometimes seems to fall short, as Literature it is superb. It is the Literature that keeps me reading and fascinated.

as good as the previous chapters. You paint a good, erotic picture that I can see in my mind's eye. I think there was a minor typo somewhere but I've forgotten where. Thanks!

I loved how he tortured her and denied her release. Can't wait to see how he punishes her for cumming, despite his forcing her. This story had me close.

Please don't stop writing the stories. My goodness, they're amazing. They're relationship is the most perfect thing I could imagine, and I love all of the great ideas I steal for my own play :)

You asked for comment....keep it cumming, don't give up! Super sexy, horny

i have not commented because i cannot speak. you have somehow gotten into me, my psyche, my being. in the first chapters, it seemed as if you were me or had been with my Husband and Master. omg you are good. this is better than 50 shades. never stop.

It's a pleasure to read this. Contains all the facts of true romance.