All Comments on 'My Own Heaven Ch. 27'

by DaniSub215

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wow!

I throughly enjoyed reading this story. I felt like I knew these characters personally. You've done a GREAT job writing this story. I hope you write more ;)

Rad'lRad'lover 14 years ago
Very, very, erotic

which is the point. Well written, a good choice of words -except for the slight overuse of 'little'. Sigh! You paint a good picture and I've enjoyed the story. Thanks.

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