All Comments on 'My Perfect Playmate; My Little Sis''

Awesome story. Can't wait to see what others you come up with.

The End? I hope not.

Fucking hot! Hope there is more

I never thought a story like this could get so entrancing but my god you've done it, what started as a single meat beating session turned into an actual story time, greatest one I've read, if America were open to more stories like this you'd be a millionaire bravo! Also why where the parents okay with this I've got to know

I really hope there's a part two to this story. That was hot!

Need the mom and daughter to swap with the brother and dad to make it one big happy family

@anon thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it. The parents were modeled after me and my gf(which is why mom needed a bit more convincing from dad to accept what happened :D). It's a level of acceptance that I know isn't very realistic but in an ideal world who knows? :p

I really enjoyed this story! I kept telling myself I felt too guilty to read it, but 8 pages later...

I'm sure a high school English teacher could mark this up pretty and red, but then they'd be missing the point. A well written, thoroughly sexy and enjoyable read. Keep it up!

Very compelling story to a gamer like myself. Once I started I couldn't stop. Very good. Keep up the good work.

Top marks Kousaka.

Your writing style is just fine. If you write more chapters please flesh out the supporting characters just a little bit more and add some depth to the location, background and of course the supporting characters. I gave you five stars and really hope you plan to write more chapters. 12 volumes, as mentioned in the story, would be fantastic! LOL. :-)

Having read all 3 of your stories (so far, hopefully there will be more to follow) and the comments so far there are a couple of points:

1 - Your writing style is your writing style, if people don't like it they don't have to read it, simple

2 - This is definitely your best work so far

3 - If you do continue onto part 2, maybe resist the temptation to add more people into the "couple" dynamic, maybe follow the path of an evolving "relationship" into love

please continue this and make it a nice long series.. and i for one actually do like getting mom involved for a 3some or more but I am not a fan of all of a sudden them sleeping with everyone they can get into their bed.

I love this!!!! Thank you for making it so long ;)

Is the manga you mentioned in your story real? If so, can you share the title? I'm really interested.

@anon It's a combination of a few things, but the main thing I'm alluding to is 'Oreimo' (the 12 volumes mentioned referring to the light novel having 12 volumes). There is a manga and an anime but both are based off of the light novel series. Also since you might be interested, Allie's cute pose was based on this pose by Hikari from demi-chan:

http://vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/demichan-wa-kataritai/images/e/ee/Hikari.png/revision/latest?cb=20170129050021

Also the side ponytail is a reference to Karen Araragi from Nisemonogatari. :D

Amazing story 👍🏼

I think you got the balnce of porn/plot just right...

Can't wait for your next one. The only thing that was slightly dissapointing was the conversation with lessie aluded to a few kinkier and rougher moments than happened in the story.

Hope there's a sequel, especially if it involves the main character manning up a little and putting his bratish sister in her place.

Congratulations on a great tale. It has enough detail to pull the reader in. There are too many stories with no real plot or character development. I could see you making a Chapter 2 if you desired. Spring break with his playmate sister and his wanton mom. Well done!

Really enjoyed the story. Would really like to see a chapter 2 that would allow their relationship to develop. As Kevin mentioned about the house, it would be good to see their relationship develop through the years living as a couple. I would agree with the other comment about leaving their relationship as a couple and not involving the parents intimately.

Nice length, plenty of sexytimes, nice family interaction, 5 stars!

Perfectly structured, with just the right amount of buildup before the denouement. Very enjoyable!

Unlike some of the others, I would like to see further chapters include the mother, perhaps some degree of competition between mother and daughter that resolves rather erotically.

Very well written, characters very charming, plot very well executed. Would love to see a part 2?

Ok guys this is getting out of hand. If you do not like the style do not read it, or better yet quit coming back to my story to anonymously complain and lash out hatefully. If I see another comment that crosses the line it'll be deleted.

You're stories are great don't listen to them f*** heads

That was one of the best incest stories I have read on this site. I would absolutely love a continuation to this story!

Fantastic story, build up was great, the mom addution at the end would lead perfectly into chapter 2. Would love to see more interaction with all three but with build up, also mel should come back for another round.

Despite the plentitude of incest stories on this site, most are lacking that special charm that drew me into incest to begin with and makes incest wincest. This story perfectly captures that charm.

From the lovable bratty sister pestering her gaming brother, the drammatic irony of Lesslie's identity, the reconciliation of the siblings as the brother admits his long-buried attraction, to the amusing antics of the family, I couldn't quite smiling the entire time whether it was from sympathy for the sibling's plight, sweetness for diabetes-inducing love that I haven't read since Fakku became pay-to-read, or the humorous interactions the family has(seriously, the way their mother just casually woke them up, accepted their relationship, then lectured them on proper sexual conduct only for Kevin to immediately back-pedal under the demands of his "goddess" was amazing).

As to the debate over your style of writing, I do believe it has to do with differences in Western and Eastern writing styles. Just looking at this site, most stories are filled with purple prose and exentuate every erotic part, trying to capture every detail but at the cost of bloating the story; on the other hand, your story's writing is reminiscent of light novels in which the story is concise with brisk detail. The trade-off here being that the sex scenes can feel sparse and too quick ;granted I didn't mind overtly since it let me finish this story in one go.

Speaking of the differences between the West and East, I think that might be the missing charm that I mentioned above. Most of the incest stories on this site display the Western ideal incest: the hot MILF or sexy sister in contrast to the Eastern ideal incest: the adorable imouto who just wants her onii-chan's love. I believe you showcased this in-story by having Kevin not turned on by his near-naked "bombshell" mother yet loses control when confronted by his sister'site cuteness. In the end, cuteness trumps hotness or sexiness, for cute is justice! Looking at your profile pic and name, I can see why your writing has an Eastern feel to it and why I enjoy it so much since it was Oriemo that enlightened me to the path of wincest (even if Kirino is constantly fighting/trading spots with Ruri and Ayase)

LOOOOOOL TEAMTALK LOOOOOOL

~user left your channel~

~you were moved~

Lol just imagining that was so funny.

tbh great story 10/10

Well written and a nice story. You put enough attention in all aspects rather than focusing on your favorite and letting other areas fall apart. Bravo

get the mother involved, it would be very hot

Rarely do I take the time to read through multiple page stories, but this one just had to be read right through! A colourful and though provoking tale which was enjoyable from start to finish.... 10/10 - Jay

A great read with a better story to match it. I've never read more than a 2 page story before and now all longer ones have an extremely high standard to live up to.

I've never ever read something so long, while it still maintained a good pace and not seeming too long. I just longed to read more. This is an absolute masterpiece. Five stars for you!~<3

I'm not happy about getting Mel and their mom involved.

Who else will keep Allie's motor running while she's missing her bro?

Can't wait to read about it in the sequel. Maybe Dad will lend her a hand too...or something.

My compliments. this is by far my favorite story. Please keep posting stories

Great story, really enjoyed how it carried on. Not sure about involving mom, but I liked the interlude with Mel--wouldn't have minded some more exploration with her.

Very arousing. I had to force my legs closed in order to not masturbate with my family in the car

I started reading and could not stop. Not even to pee ! I used a bucket !

I hated to see it end. But the end was as good as the rest of it. I look

forward to finding more of your stories. Ken

please write part-2.. this was hillarious.

Awesome story, love their unrestrained sexual hunger and their great chemistry.

Would love to see a continuation, especially one where Mel and the mother become more involved with them. I can also imagine the sister in some dominating bi/lesbian action to show both Mel and her mother that she always come first.

Damn, that was fucking awesome! Great way using gaming, as a way to introduce how Allie has a deep love for Kevin, and eventually bringing the same feelings out of Kevin, for her, using manga... and Mel... I bet she went home, and fingerfucked herself silly.

Awesome Awesome Awesome.

One of the best stories I have ever read Awesome

I love that you used Oreimo as inspiration for this story.

... and so joyful !

Life is good. At least virtually. Virtue is the fundamental value.

Thanks. Chuck.

One of the best stories I've read on Literotica; beautifully written: erotic, well-developed characters and story line.

The best incest story I've read so far. I would love to see a sequel, bring in the jealous mother.

Please make a sequel including the mom and his sister!!!

Can you make something about the Allie and her dad :D

Really enjoyed this story and looking forward to more chapters. How do Kevin and Allie resolve their relationship? Does it stay behind closed doors? Do the parents get more involved? Would also like to see some of those things Kevin talked about early on, like tying up his sister and taking her when she's helpless. Please keep going - don't let this story end here!

I loved every part of a sensuous loving hot story

Wouldn't hurt to knock up old mom though.

Maybe he could be trapped with his mom somehow

I liked Dyno224 's suggestion about knocking Mom up. but with maybe Allie and Dad's encouragement !

I enjoyed this story quite a bit. They way things escalated and the fact that we readers could know that she was the mysterious sexy online friend earlier than he did raised the tension quite a bit. The characters were a lot of fun and unique (I loved the singsong way that Allie spoke, for example), and I suspected that his parents were also siblings.

At times it even felt like I was watching hentai, which was pretty cool given the references and your username. Thank you again for sharing!

A rivalry between Allie and their mother could be fun. Having it ending after a mistaken identity where he accidentally knocks up his own mother (sex in the dark? drunk Halloween party?) and have to confess to her that he isn't really in to her.

Also continuing the dissecting of Mels motivations etc. could be fun. Maybe she just likes to watch or being humiliated. Stranger things have been written. She could be their proactive cover since Allies recklessness is a time bomb.

It was really great! Loved every bit of it! But is it really the end? It didn't feel like it when you involved the mother, would love to see another part of this story. Well i guess you heard that a lot about a pt.2. I dont mind seeing A father/daughter or mother/son scenario, always nice to see everyone getting involved. As one of the guy in comments said that he 'Suspected that the parents are sibs too' well that never crossed my mind guess that kinda explains their willingness to except the relationship.

I hate to be that guy, but I really hope there's a continuation coming one of these days. Great story.

You write some great stuff, this was fantastic!

Absolutely fantastic! As others said I thought there was a story there with mom and would love to see that. Thanks for a GREAT story.

Yeah, what everyone else have said; loved to see a pt. 2 involving everyone, or mom atleast. Love the work, love you and keep it up :)

One of the best brother/sister stories I have read- funny, witty and sexual! So fun to read! Yes, like others, was intrigued about how mother might fit into a sequel! Anxious to read your other writings!,AqkPd5

I definitely feel this needs a part t9 on their college days!

I enjoyed your story immensely! Absolutely fantastic! Love the characters and the sexual tension that kept building till Kevin realized his little sister, Allie is who he really wants all along. Great sex! Enjoyed the gaming elements too. All in all a truly wonderful Fantasy! Thanks for an amazing read. I hope we will see a continuation of Kevin and Allie in the near future.

With a pair of siblings that were in love with each other (or so I was being lead to believe). For me, the story ends page 5/6. It devolves from there to become the type of siblingcest that just *need* to include others. They do seem to be the most common fare. Highly disappointed. 1 star.

Keep going. Please!

I'm surprised nobody had pointed out that in the virtual wedding part Allie mentions having a display pic. Wouldn't Kevin have seen that before and recognized his sister? Especially if he was "one cyber session away from proposing"?

Other than that the whole thing was of top quality. I immensely enjoyed reading it. I would be up to reading more of their story, where they go from here.

Don't give 5's, oh wait I just did. More please.

Great story, needs another chapter to finish it properly

I love it. great story. keep up the good work.

Amazingly funny, deliciously sexy, and heart warming all at the same time. Thanks for writing this tale. 10/10. Also, I certainly wouldn't object to a continuation that involved the mother.

I like this story enough that I've added it to my favorite stories list and will read it again soon and again down the road. This is a five out of five story for me for a number of reasons. First, weirdly enough I rarely come here looking for JO material, mostly I come looking for good well written and believable bro/sis romances or stories that remind me of something. Believability is important because when it comes to brothers and sisters rarely do both simultaneously for no reason other than sudden lust toss aside their deeply ingrained rejection of breaching the taboo in a few minutes. Not always, but it often takes one slowly overcoming the taboo first and having a fantasy life, or dealing a sudden situation, however sometimes when both stay best friends from cradle to grave it just happens. This story was a beautiful example of the first and I love the slow believable build up. The parent part is harder to believe but we can all fantasize about having parents that understanding. Mine would have cut my nuts off, fed them to me for breakfast and then tossed my butt out of the door.

The second important thing for me is humor and Allie is seriously funny and whip smart. That brings up the third, intelligence. As I pointed out Allie is whip smart and Kevin isn't far behind.

Forth, I like a bro/sis story that ends in a committed very monogamous happily ever after. It's hard to pull off but I find it heartwarming.

Finally I hate two page "they fucked - the end" stories. I love a slow build up and I want to know about the aftermath. Even if it's just to learn if they "returned to their spouses" and met on birthdays, however with a story like this my preferred ending is a lengthy "they lived happily ever" and a follow up. This story hints at a "happily ever after" but I'd really like to read a follow up to this truly beautiful story starting with his return from college and them playing man and wife in the home gifted by their parents. There are a lot of struggles keeping a taboo relationship secret unless you move far far far from home. Kissing in public is impossible in a town where too many people know both of you, and keeping a good job is almost impossible if word leaks out.

You hit all of my likes and avoided all of my "not-likes" so again, I loved this story. Now, please get started on Chapter two.

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A note to other authors: I know some readers fantasize about such things but I have no interest in what I view as contemptuous "hayseed stories," or non-consensual, or disregard for birth control. If you love your sis and you do not want to ruin her life or hurt her. I hate stories where the brother thinks of his sister as just a throwaway fucktoy only fit to get his nut in. Personally, I hate such stories and try hard to avoid them. I'm not a story censor but, please do us both a favor and include a warning or I will leave a one star rating.

That was fun.

Or give her a larger role in the next installment!!

FUCK! Dayyyyy-Um! That was one mesmerizing, enthralling, captivating Work of Scorchingly HOT Erotic Art!!!

That set the bar way past the Stratosphere and all the way up into Outer Space!

That was some fantastic writing, Kousakacomplex! WOW!

Very well put together. Great stand alone sibling romance story that has so much potential for much much more. Just can't wait for more. Don't leave us hanging long please.

Loved the story, humor, tiny bit of drama and a teasing bitch getting her just desserts.

wait hold on.

so discovering their kids have sex and the parents response is just..." oh I guess my kids are having sex with each other, just don't do it outside/in public"

??

what? I mean the story is hot, fun to read, well written otherwise but this reaction completely threw me off. I don't mean there always has to be a huge fallout or drama when couples get discovered. but that was a little TOO casual about it.

Another point. how you've written this story, it felt/sounded like its part of a multichapter story.

Seeing this story is from 2017, I don't think you'll write more on them.

sad. it's a good story, funny.

but you left significant things open.

Wow, I just about forgot how much sex two youngsters can have when it's all new and shiny. Well written story with the buildup, the chase and then ending with the brother and sister in love. Not sure how realistic the Mom and Dad response would be in real life, unless there was something hidden in their past that made it all acceptable. As it was, Mom sure didn't mind a little grouping from Kevin when he was getting ready to leave. Could be that it runs in the family. Sure would be interesting to find out. that is if there ever is a continuation to the story.

One of the first I read on this site and boy was it a goodie. A fun read.

any other weeb that got oregairu vibes? feels like this wasn't written by a gaming nerd but by a weaboo

Well written, wonderful relatable characters, hot set. Winner!

Would've loved this if it remained between brother and sister alone.

Loved it, but Mel can go away... 5 stars

I absolutely love, love. LOVE the idea of this story. Having a little sister chase her big brother into the virtual world and pursue him there makes my gamer girl heart go :SQUEE: Not to mention manipulating him to do things for real that will try to bring them together and deal with any "competition".

I thought the story was incredible right up to the point of the parents finding them in bed.

I can see there being some kind of compassion and understanding on the discovery stemming from the fact that at least the mom could see what was going on and how her daughter was acting towards her brother, maybe due to some feelings of her own. When you couple that with the traumatic experience of Kevin rushing out into the cold and Allie going out to save him and bring him back, its understandable that all those emotions and feelings might just explode and they have sex or something along that line. So given all that, I can understand the parents being reasonable and trying to understand what happened, and what (if anything) has happened prior to that between their children. I can also understand them trying to give them some space to figure out what it is that is going on between them.

The whole "use protection and don't cum in your sister anymore" response while giving them a blanket license to just have sex at will just strikes me as absurd and takes away from an otherwise outstanding story. The parents were just entirely too blase about the entire situation to make it even somewhat realistic.

well done

I absolutely love, love. LOVE the idea of this story. Having a little sister chase her big brother into the virtual world and pursue him there makes my gamer girl heart go :SQUEE: Not to mention manipulating him to do things for real that will try to bring them together and deal with any "competition".

P.S. i copied this from the second comment under me but i absolutely agree with him so, yeah my comment is great....just great i usually dont type something this long but now i dont know why i'm typing all this

Wonderful 🐱

Perfect 🥰

Very hot 🔥

Very romantic 😍

Too

I’m not a gamer, and I found it too long. But I appreciated the lack of grammatical errors. You write clearly and lucidly. I’m glad to see other’s encouragement.

This one always makes me want kids just so I can be such a troll, everyone is just too amusing in this one :D

Never did get a chat about them always fighting like lovers though- rather than too short like the last reviewer I reckon it needed a couple mors pages. Great stuff though, sorry it took so long to drop a review.

Not gamer but the story had a nice lead but you should make another chapter it needs more of a ending to it

(11/14/2021) Nicely done; this was a fun read. All eight pages were fun. I would have loved for Melanie to come crawling back and beg for a threesome. 5 stars from me.

Great story. The small scene with Mel was a great addition. I'd love to see a second story with a bit more of that. Allie exploring being dominant was very cute.

These 8 pages are some of the best I have read lately; the story, from start to finish, is invested with EMOTION that is carried by each side in it!

The base story of love between brother and sister is great; including Mom and Mel peripherally was entertaining for their reactions to the relationship between Kevin and Allie...I disagree that their inclusion detracted from the focus of the story. (Was rather surprised you have not carried ANY of this any further...HINT! HINT!)

Please write another chapter!

I must admit to being, pleasantly, surprised. Somewhere around the 3rd page I was ready to jump all the way to the end and drop a one-star rating. With Allie being very brat-ish, knowing you were going to somehow get them over it, I was expecting something like Kevin suddenly realizing how beautiful Allie is and getting all hot and bothered. Instead, you craft a credible explanation of Kevin always having these feelings but pushing Allie away and convincing himself that he hated her and that she was a brat. Which, of course, explained her brattish behavior of going through his things and always annoying him by trying to act like that manga character. Also, that mom knew all along what was going on and why Kevin "hated" Allie. The only fly-in-the-ointment (to me) was that his mother could have explained it to him or talk to him about it, but instead she let it festered to the point that Kevin almost committed suicide (and it was Allie who rescued him, not mom and dad). So I am going with 4 stars. A fairly cool brother/sister story.

This is the best story for weebs/nerds/gamers with a little sister kink. 10/10

From start to finish this just kept getting better and better. So fucking hot!

A *really* great story - beautifully written.

Thank you.