All Comments on 'My Personal Masseuse Pt. 01'

Not too bad. There were mistakes but has potential.

ONE STAR

Loved it.

-26thNC Approved

26thNCuck approved it, so it must be a cuck story. 1* Aren't you going to troll any of the high scoring stories, since you hate them so much?

Another slut who would rather cheat than care about her marriage. It's a shame that so many young people keep looking for the easier way than facing problems and solving them. Young people can only really "grow" through problems and their overcoming! And even worse, that men are so stupid and believe that women who act like your protagonist won't do the same to them at some point in the future!

Nothing to write home about, 1*

Needs a 2nd chapter

No story. Wrong catagory.

You really need to proofread your stories before posting. So many mistakes, obvious ones, detract from the reading. But your story was good, enjoyed the anticipation and build-up. Do have to point out that unlike most porn which is so stereotyped it becomes boring, it is NOT all about the blow job, or hand job. Please involve the girls, too.

A great build up! Wish that was me!